Comments received on poems by speakmywords
Unknown woman
mhpoet said:
Very powerful message you send out on this poem! Keep up the amazing work! You have a unique talent!
July 27th, 2016 17:59
mhpoet said:
Very powerful message you send out on this poem! Keep up the amazing work! You have a unique talent!
July 27th, 2016 17:59
You\'re just to young.
mhpoet said:
you did an amazing job in expressing yourself and that is what matters most
July 27th, 2016 01:42
mhpoet said:
you did an amazing job in expressing yourself and that is what matters most
July 27th, 2016 01:42
You\'re just to young.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SMW ~ Love the nuances in this poem. Poetry is part of the ORAL tradition and it was passed on orally long before it was ever written down ~ so you are allowed some poetic licence ! To me it reads OK ~ I am a performance poet ! In my experience "They always tried to tell me ~ I was too young ~ too young to really be in love !" Boys have to learn as well ~ but in the natural order of things it is always the Girl who carries the consequence.. The age of legal consent in the UK is 16 ~ which in my book is only just old enough ~ 18 would be more sensible. However the stats show that many young females are sexually active from 12 onwards and that is much too young ! The internet has a lot to answer for in respect of young Male exploitation (and expectation). of even younger Females. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
July 26th, 2016 18:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SMW ~ Love the nuances in this poem. Poetry is part of the ORAL tradition and it was passed on orally long before it was ever written down ~ so you are allowed some poetic licence ! To me it reads OK ~ I am a performance poet ! In my experience "They always tried to tell me ~ I was too young ~ too young to really be in love !" Boys have to learn as well ~ but in the natural order of things it is always the Girl who carries the consequence.. The age of legal consent in the UK is 16 ~ which in my book is only just old enough ~ 18 would be more sensible. However the stats show that many young females are sexually active from 12 onwards and that is much too young ! The internet has a lot to answer for in respect of young Male exploitation (and expectation). of even younger Females. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
July 26th, 2016 18:32
You\'re just to young.
DieIdeeDerKraftEinerIdee said:
Can I be your editor? In order all of the errors: *too* *"Sit down."[,] my sister tells me* *tells me, [lower case]a* *He seeps* *through* *too* *through* *and teach me his world[,] then...* *You're not too young for that[,] little girl. Sorry to seem like lang-8.com , just trying to help.
July 26th, 2016 18:13
DieIdeeDerKraftEinerIdee said:
Can I be your editor? In order all of the errors: *too* *"Sit down."[,] my sister tells me* *tells me, [lower case]a* *He seeps* *through* *too* *through* *and teach me his world[,] then...* *You're not too young for that[,] little girl. Sorry to seem like lang-8.com , just trying to help.
July 26th, 2016 18:13
