Comments received on poems by alanis98



Don\'t punish yourself
Somerica said:

Well written. You poem.

June 25th, 2017 21:46

Don\'t punish yourself
alanis98 said:

Thank you for your feedback and support it means a lot. Xxx

May 26th, 2017 02:15

Don\'t punish yourself
Augustus said:

I don\'t know much about poetry either, only what I\'ve learned from this site. Your poem is what they call free verse, without specific meter and no rhyme. It reads easily where the reader does not have to stop, hesitate and reread the last sentence to make sense out of it. You are consistent throughout about your friends problem and you speaking from the heart. Nicely done.

May 25th, 2017 17:31

Don\'t punish yourself
Somerica said:

Really vivid and interesting. It just has narrative sound to it. Just figure what kinda style you want write. But other the poem Was good.

May 25th, 2017 10:50

Don\'t punish yourself
alanis98 said:

As I\'m new to poetry please let me know what you think I need to work on. I normally just write​ what comes from my heart, but please let me know

May 25th, 2017 10:35

HOPE!!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, hope in our lives is so very powerful.

May 25th, 2017 00:52

HOPE!!
Rajkumar said:

Hope always hides when we are in trouble only memories get it back to us...nicely written....I loved it..

May 24th, 2017 09:24

HOPE!!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS ALANIS ~ For very lovely Poem encouraging the Virtue of Hope. Without HOPE there an be no future. THERESA MAY took on as PM in a difficult time and has steered us towards a Strong Brexit. The events in Manchester have given her another hurdle bur she has not given up HOPE for Peace & Love. JEREMY has been equally encouraging. We all need HOPE in the future that GOOD will prevail over EVIL Thanks for encouraging us to replace DESPAIR with HOPE in these difficult days. Yours BRIAN ~ Thanks for supporting MANCHESTER a Great City ~ B

May 24th, 2017 06:04

now your gone
alanis98 said:

Thank u

May 24th, 2017 04:42

now your gone
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 7th, 2016 13:59

now your gone
alanis98 said:

Thank you for your kind words. Xx


October 7th, 2016 11:10

Just one more day
alanis98 said:

Thank you. Xx


August 2nd, 2016 02:47

Just one more day
willyweed said:

one fine day your wish will come true. nice poem. ww

August 1st, 2016 08:42