Comments received on poems by ronin_kiaran
Fuck this. Fuck That
Moni said:
Although I didn\'t love the language I loved the poem for what it says. Great job.
January 26th, 2017 08:38
Moni said:
Although I didn\'t love the language I loved the poem for what it says. Great job.
January 26th, 2017 08:38
Fuck this. Fuck That
nicolerobinson said:
To say this has lots of bad language. I think its amazing
January 26th, 2017 05:11
nicolerobinson said:
To say this has lots of bad language. I think its amazing
January 26th, 2017 05:11
We Three Three Three
willyweed said:
good form and flow
with a great message. well done ww
December 31st, 2016 11:29
willyweed said:
good form and flow
with a great message. well done ww
December 31st, 2016 11:29
life\'s big question mark
WriteBeLight said:
Love all the questions you ask. Genius style!
December 20th, 2016 05:31
WriteBeLight said:
Love all the questions you ask. Genius style!
December 20th, 2016 05:31
Way of the universe
octaviayoung1 said:
this is really good i like it a lot good job
August 15th, 2016 21:46
octaviayoung1 said:
this is really good i like it a lot good job
August 15th, 2016 21:46
I do, i dont
ronin_kiaran said:
Formatting consustanty is. Lil buggy/messed up. Supposed to be left aligned centered, the right aligned. Anyways, hopefully you get the jest of it.
August 9th, 2016 16:57
ronin_kiaran said:
Formatting consustanty is. Lil buggy/messed up. Supposed to be left aligned centered, the right aligned. Anyways, hopefully you get the jest of it.
August 9th, 2016 16:57
Person vs people
lysistrata said:
"If you would like to voice your complaints & grievances at the above statement please, send your email to: goFuckYouself@gmail.com)"
Are you running Donald Trump's campaign?🐒🐷🐮
August 8th, 2016 08:07
lysistrata said:
"If you would like to voice your complaints & grievances at the above statement please, send your email to: goFuckYouself@gmail.com)"
Are you running Donald Trump's campaign?🐒🐷🐮
August 8th, 2016 08:07
Primitive Outdated Racist Mentality
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
When you get a Chump like Donald Trump ~ whose biased towards color ~ You get a Guy who turns a blind eye to a vision that is fuller. The USA is a melting pot and each one should be equal ~ you cant reverse their history and there should be no sequel ! People who often are deemed INFERIOR ~ the Olympic Games will show who's SUPERIOR ! Please take note of MISTER MO FARRAH and MISTER USAIN BOLT. Thanks for sharing we should should all oppose racism wherever and whenever we find it ! BRIAN
August 5th, 2016 14:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
When you get a Chump like Donald Trump ~ whose biased towards color ~ You get a Guy who turns a blind eye to a vision that is fuller. The USA is a melting pot and each one should be equal ~ you cant reverse their history and there should be no sequel ! People who often are deemed INFERIOR ~ the Olympic Games will show who's SUPERIOR ! Please take note of MISTER MO FARRAH and MISTER USAIN BOLT. Thanks for sharing we should should all oppose racism wherever and whenever we find it ! BRIAN
August 5th, 2016 14:16
Figuring it all out
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RONIN ~ Thanks for a well crafted first poem (I love rhyming couplets) with a challenging subject. Modern life is very constricting and tries to force us into Societies straight-jacket ! You come across as a "free spirit" not willing to be contained in Societies cage. Your excellent poem is replete with the cons of 21st C expectations. However if we reject Society we throw away the baby with the bath water and we can end up in a vacuum of our own making. This explains the frustration in your last stanza ! I ******* quit ~ screw thinking ~ **** this shit ! Most people I know ~ just compromise and get on with it ! BRIAN
August 4th, 2016 13:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RONIN ~ Thanks for a well crafted first poem (I love rhyming couplets) with a challenging subject. Modern life is very constricting and tries to force us into Societies straight-jacket ! You come across as a "free spirit" not willing to be contained in Societies cage. Your excellent poem is replete with the cons of 21st C expectations. However if we reject Society we throw away the baby with the bath water and we can end up in a vacuum of our own making. This explains the frustration in your last stanza ! I ******* quit ~ screw thinking ~ **** this shit ! Most people I know ~ just compromise and get on with it ! BRIAN
August 4th, 2016 13:57
