Comments received on poems by _Lily_fortune_
paint me a picture
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing LILY ~ Love the poem and the message it brings. As you know I am an encourager and I welcome all the new Poets on MPS and encourage them in their writing. Whatever age we are ~ being ignored is the worse thing we have to endure. I promise (hand on heart) never ever to ignore anybody ever again ! Love BRIAN
September 1st, 2016 16:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing LILY ~ Love the poem and the message it brings. As you know I am an encourager and I welcome all the new Poets on MPS and encourage them in their writing. Whatever age we are ~ being ignored is the worse thing we have to endure. I promise (hand on heart) never ever to ignore anybody ever again ! Love BRIAN
September 1st, 2016 16:19
Thought Bubble
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Wonderful poem LILY _ I love rhyming couplets nice to read ~ easy to recite ! To keep out of trouble ~ keep your thoughts in a bubble ~ a problem shared ~ is a problem doubled ! This is my experience ! If you internalise your thoughts ~ they solve themselves and go away ! However if you burst the BUBBLE and share them (on Facebook etc) they multiply and come back to haunt you. Least said ~ best mended ! My experience and advice is KEEP THEM IN THE BUBBLE ! Your Friend BRIAN
August 7th, 2016 11:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Wonderful poem LILY _ I love rhyming couplets nice to read ~ easy to recite ! To keep out of trouble ~ keep your thoughts in a bubble ~ a problem shared ~ is a problem doubled ! This is my experience ! If you internalise your thoughts ~ they solve themselves and go away ! However if you burst the BUBBLE and share them (on Facebook etc) they multiply and come back to haunt you. Least said ~ best mended ! My experience and advice is KEEP THEM IN THE BUBBLE ! Your Friend BRIAN
August 7th, 2016 11:10
Fairytale
willyweed said:
I love fairy tales they are the best kind of write. nice job! ww
August 6th, 2016 22:11
willyweed said:
I love fairy tales they are the best kind of write. nice job! ww
August 6th, 2016 22:11
The Voice
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LILY ~ Thanks for a challenging first poem. well structured replete with rhyme (pattern axax bb cc) and rhythm. This makes it a pleasure to read and recite. Subject is as important as structure and I like the one you have chosen. Finding ones voice and actually using it ! Hopefully we find our voice at school (by the time we are 16 !) and we have the courage to use it throughout our lives. I was encouraged at school to speak up and defend my own beliefs and opinions and ideas. We should never stifle the independence of a child ~ just because they are a child. We should all be entitled to air our own ideas and choices. Thanks for sharing a great poem ! BRIAN
August 5th, 2016 14:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LILY ~ Thanks for a challenging first poem. well structured replete with rhyme (pattern axax bb cc) and rhythm. This makes it a pleasure to read and recite. Subject is as important as structure and I like the one you have chosen. Finding ones voice and actually using it ! Hopefully we find our voice at school (by the time we are 16 !) and we have the courage to use it throughout our lives. I was encouraged at school to speak up and defend my own beliefs and opinions and ideas. We should never stifle the independence of a child ~ just because they are a child. We should all be entitled to air our own ideas and choices. Thanks for sharing a great poem ! BRIAN
August 5th, 2016 14:40
The Voice
willyweed said:
yes you are correct only you can live your life. welcome! ww
August 5th, 2016 10:51
willyweed said:
yes you are correct only you can live your life. welcome! ww
August 5th, 2016 10:51
