Comments received on poems by LisaNicole3797
Don\'t Look Back
Tropicana said:
this is relatable, correct me if I'm wrong, it sounds like she's contemplating suicide and she thinks in some spiritual world she'll find someone who cares?
August 13th, 2016 15:25
Tropicana said:
this is relatable, correct me if I'm wrong, it sounds like she's contemplating suicide and she thinks in some spiritual world she'll find someone who cares?
August 13th, 2016 15:25
Speechless
willyweed said:
sometimes nothing is better than some thing. your right it is sad. good job. ww
August 8th, 2016 09:17
willyweed said:
sometimes nothing is better than some thing. your right it is sad. good job. ww
August 8th, 2016 09:17
Longing for love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LISA ~ for another lovely structured poem from your loving heart. It is something we can all relate to more or less. People need People ! A Friend of my Mum's (who is 90) who lives in a luxury Retirement Home said to me when I visited "I wish I had a chum !" she is dying of "friend starvation" surrounded by opulence and dementia. Perhaps it's even worse when you are still young ! Thanks for sharing ~ Thanks for being my Friend ~ Yours BRIAN
August 7th, 2016 11:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LISA ~ for another lovely structured poem from your loving heart. It is something we can all relate to more or less. People need People ! A Friend of my Mum's (who is 90) who lives in a luxury Retirement Home said to me when I visited "I wish I had a chum !" she is dying of "friend starvation" surrounded by opulence and dementia. Perhaps it's even worse when you are still young ! Thanks for sharing ~ Thanks for being my Friend ~ Yours BRIAN
August 7th, 2016 11:02
Why did you leave?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LISA ~ Thank you for a powerfully written but very sad first poem. Rhyming couplets give the poem flow and make it interesting to read and recite. The subject happens and it is so tragic when a partner rejects their lover just when they need them most. Often people are in denial about the true situation. Your final line is very haunting "Turns out she's dying and you're the one crying. A friend of mine was deserted by his Wife of 20 years after he had a stroke. He's OK but five years later he is still single and lonely while she has a new partner. Life can be cruel ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
August 7th, 2016 03:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LISA ~ Thank you for a powerfully written but very sad first poem. Rhyming couplets give the poem flow and make it interesting to read and recite. The subject happens and it is so tragic when a partner rejects their lover just when they need them most. Often people are in denial about the true situation. Your final line is very haunting "Turns out she's dying and you're the one crying. A friend of mine was deserted by his Wife of 20 years after he had a stroke. He's OK but five years later he is still single and lonely while she has a new partner. Life can be cruel ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
August 7th, 2016 03:02
