Comments received on poems by dawnmoonchild
Limbo
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DAWN ~Thanks for a thoughtful first poem well penned and busting with rhythm. As to the Subject LIMBO ~ caught between Heaven & Hell ! We never know what a day my bring or where will end up ~ shining Sunflower or shrinking Violet ~and as you say even our darkest thought can (eventually) gleam. Thanks for sharing # BRIAN
August 9th, 2016 04:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DAWN ~Thanks for a thoughtful first poem well penned and busting with rhythm. As to the Subject LIMBO ~ caught between Heaven & Hell ! We never know what a day my bring or where will end up ~ shining Sunflower or shrinking Violet ~and as you say even our darkest thought can (eventually) gleam. Thanks for sharing # BRIAN
August 9th, 2016 04:39