Comments received on poems by clockwork
Deception
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This piece speaks to me, on many levels. In fact, it reminds me of one of the works I've written before, a few months ago, to be precise. About a demon in disguise, hiding in the flesh of a man.
With that, nicely done. I greatly appreciate the demon in disguise theory. Thanks for the read
~RTBH
August 16th, 2016 09:28
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This piece speaks to me, on many levels. In fact, it reminds me of one of the works I've written before, a few months ago, to be precise. About a demon in disguise, hiding in the flesh of a man.
With that, nicely done. I greatly appreciate the demon in disguise theory. Thanks for the read
~RTBH
August 16th, 2016 09:28
Where?
clockwork said:
Thank you for your feedback
I have a few dark themed pieces Ive written down
August 15th, 2016 13:09
clockwork said:
Thank you for your feedback
I have a few dark themed pieces Ive written down
August 15th, 2016 13:09
Where?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CW ~ Thanks for a vey challenging first poem. Well penned but with a very sad subject ~ WHERE ? The MIND is at the root of our depression and can (last line) drive us to insanity. The GOOD BBOK tells us we can be transformed "By the renewing of our Minds". My experience is when we allow a higher force (GOD) into our lives # our depression can be lifted. Thanks for sharing ~BRIAN
August 15th, 2016 07:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CW ~ Thanks for a vey challenging first poem. Well penned but with a very sad subject ~ WHERE ? The MIND is at the root of our depression and can (last line) drive us to insanity. The GOOD BBOK tells us we can be transformed "By the renewing of our Minds". My experience is when we allow a higher force (GOD) into our lives # our depression can be lifted. Thanks for sharing ~BRIAN
August 15th, 2016 07:18
