Comments received on poems by lonelygirl123



I Can\'t
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing ANGEL ~ the NEXT STEP is always the most difficult one. I LOVE and in all aspects of LIFE. I love Rock Climbing and the book said "Take a blind swing on a flake of doubtful stability". I couldn't go back ~ so I SWUNG ~ the next step ! I landed on a ledge and the route to the top was easy. I almost FROZE and often do in LIFE but (in my experience) the next step is always the most rewarding. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my latest poem INNOCENCE ~ Thanks. .

August 27th, 2016 03:04

I Can\'t
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sometimes ! great theme

August 27th, 2016 01:10

Fading Away
daniel dawes said:

Good poem I really enjoyed it and understood where you are at in it. Endings and death always brings new beginnings and life. Thanks for sharing.

August 24th, 2016 02:26

Fading Away
JohnThomas said:

Excellent poem. I love the last verse in particular. Well done! 😎

August 23rd, 2016 20:15

nothing
Mads said:

I have been there and still am there. I try to tell myself that I am enough but I still can't seem to believe it...

August 23rd, 2016 13:39

nothing
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME LONELY GIRL ~ Thanks for sharing a personal poem which has made us think. Mirror Mirror on the Wall who is the ?????? of them all. I'm a single guy (33) so I see potential and opportunity. But I only see what i want to see and in many respects like you I'm hurting intside. People (and the mirror) only see the exterior and the face we choose to put on. We (and GOD) know what's on the inside and it hurts especially when people hurt us with their lies. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

August 23rd, 2016 10:36

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JohnThomas said:

I think we all have been there. It's not easy to share such feelings.
Thank you for sharing what's in your heart. I hope things get better for you.

August 22nd, 2016 20:47