Love doesnt here nor does it dwell there
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhh ANGEL so much beauty and so much pain ! Beautifully structured poem ~ lovely photo (Black is Beautiful) _ elegant video (love Alicia Keyes) But such a sad sad content in your poem. ALICIA sings ~ Have you ever tried sleeping with a broken heart ~ Well you could try sleeping in my bed ~ Lonely own me ~ nobody ever shut m down like you ........ That ANGEL is how you describe your relationship. Arguments ~ Grizzly Bear ~ Hatred ~ Tension ~ LOVE doesn't live here ~ nor does it dwell there ! Toxin ~ Venom ~ Affliction ~ Constriction ~ Friction ~ Eviction ~ No longer care or bear ~ Love doesn't live here ~ nor does it dwell there. I would never treat you like that ANGEL you are much much too precious ~ Love and Prayers ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my poem ~ You'll Never Walk Alone ~ Thanks B

September 16th, 2016 08:39

He
FruitfulSpirit said:

Thank you Brian. Im just so Grateful that He is My Everything even when I dont desrve it.

September 13th, 2016 13:18

He
Tony36 said:

AWESOME write

September 13th, 2016 12:15

I Am Me Wholeheartedly
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SWEETHEART for sharing an awesome video and an awesome poem ! You are very Beautiful an all the things you say in your poem ~ I love you just as you am ~ AMEN. The unique and incredible person you are SWEETHEART is God's gift to you ~ What you make of your life is your Gift back to GOD. Thinkin' of you and prayin' for you 24/7 Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my latest poems ~ Thanks B

September 10th, 2016 17:51

Lifes Lessons
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANK YOU ANGEL ~ For a a beautiful poem straight fom you aching heart. Love the video and the Lyrics ~ they spoke to me ! "And you really wish the CHURCH coild say more to you ~ cause God as close as you want Him to ~ please remember he can ~ know he'll be there to do whatever you can't ~ (please) know He's only one ~ ONE PRAYER AWAY ! We all get depressed and frustrated ANGEL but as you say in you poem the answer is ~ Getting on your knees and praying to GOD ~ YAH ! The LORD's PRAYER is a wonderful prayer and enable us to cast our worries and cares on GOD because He cares for us 24/7. YES we do have a wonderful GOD ~ YAH ~ keep praying and trusting in HIM ~ AMEN. Thinking of you and praying for you 24/7 ~ Love in the SPIRIT ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem ~ PENELOPE ~ Thanks B

September 5th, 2016 14:05

Battling Anger
FruitfulSpirit said:

Thank you

September 3rd, 2016 15:12

Battling Anger
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANGEL for a great poem with a great message and lots of lovely Scriptures. Anger & Wrath are fruit of the flesh motivated by Satan ! Love ~ Joy ~ Peace ~ Gentleness are Fruit of the Spirit. You know and I know Angel that when we resist the Devil he will flee from us and we will be filled with God's Holy Spirit the ANGER will go and be replaces with Love ~ Joy ~ Peace & Gentleness. AMEN Sister ! Love & Prayers ~ BRIAN

September 3rd, 2016 15:05

A Living Proof
FruitfulSpirit said:

Thank you

September 2nd, 2016 09:33

A Note of Suicide
P.X. Vexxus said:

A very similar piece to what I would write. It holds a dark atmosphere, but it's captivating in it's ability to present the emotions of the author. A great poem.

September 1st, 2016 19:46

Reflections of My Imperfections
Tony36 said:

Lovely picture, Awesome Awesome poem

September 1st, 2016 17:42

Reflections of My Imperfections
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI ANGEL ~ love you picture ~ You and your daughter are beautiful # just as GOD created you INSIDE & OUT ! I love the optimism and positivity in your beautiful poem it is very uplifting. What we see in the mirror is just the SHELL what GOD sees is the beauty of the inner person ~ AMEN Love the line "Then I spoke encouragement to myself" Amen SISTER that's what we need to do each new day ~ encourage ourselves and let GOD work in us and through us AMEN ! Love & Prayers ~ BRIAN

September 1st, 2016 15:51

A Note of Suicide
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhh SWEETHEART ~ Spiritual Suicide is in someways worse than Physical Suicide' In the latter you just give up on life in the former your give up on GOD ! Count your Blessing ANGEL and you will see just how much GOD loves you and has given you ! Your are bright ~ sassy and a Mother of lovely Children ~ You have Friends and a Family who care for and if you belong to a Church a whole Congregation lifting you up before the throne ! Lots of Members at MPS love you and you know I love you and pray for you 24/7. The words you use in your awesome and heart rending poem ~ ring a bell and often we feel like ~ or actually give up on GOD. BUT in my experience GOD IS LOVE and is always ready to forgive and welcome us back under his sheltering rings. Thanks for sharing it instructs us how to pray for you ! Love and HUGS ~ Your faithful friend ~ BRIAN XOX

August 31st, 2016 15:31

My significant other
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME FRUITFUL SPIRIT (LOVELY NAME !) Thanks for sharing your first poem which started so lovely and ended so badly. You are a very beautiful Lady ~ what is yo' Man playin' at ? Hell ~ scream & yell ~ prisoners in a Cell etc etc ! I'm not married (yet) but I treat all my ladies like Princesses and Angels I give them lots of choices and I like to keep them satisfied. You are a great poet and your poem pulsates with life and rhyme and rhythm ~ just like you. Thanks for sharin' hope it helped ! Thinkin' of you ANGEL and prayin' for you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK ~ 33)

August 30th, 2016 07:25