Comments received on poems by FruitfulSpirit
\"Water\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY for your lovely tribute to life sustaining water. When GOD created planet Earth he made sure there was plenty of water for man and all the flora and fauna. There are billions of gallons of fresh water (salt free) in lakes and rivers. It is purified by the water cycle and will never run out. Diving into a lake of pure clear water and swimming under it (like fish) is one of life\'s most sensuous experiences. Only surpassed by standing \"au natural\" under a waterfall. Thanks for reminding us of God\'s supreme gift of WATER ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 12th, 2017 15:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY for your lovely tribute to life sustaining water. When GOD created planet Earth he made sure there was plenty of water for man and all the flora and fauna. There are billions of gallons of fresh water (salt free) in lakes and rivers. It is purified by the water cycle and will never run out. Diving into a lake of pure clear water and swimming under it (like fish) is one of life\'s most sensuous experiences. Only surpassed by standing \"au natural\" under a waterfall. Thanks for reminding us of God\'s supreme gift of WATER ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 12th, 2017 15:54
\"Water\"
Augustus said:
Great tribute to water and extremely well written and easily readable. sensuous.
February 12th, 2017 11:34
Augustus said:
Great tribute to water and extremely well written and easily readable. sensuous.
February 12th, 2017 11:34
Paradise Wish
willyweed said:
Brilliant flows like water over a slick rock. write on!
January 7th, 2017 22:25
willyweed said:
Brilliant flows like water over a slick rock. write on!
January 7th, 2017 22:25
The Soul of Lotus Flower
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL SPIRIT ~ A wonderful testimony to being BORN AGAIN and the release and power and love and freedom that comes from knowing JESUS ~ Thanks for sharing ~ HUGS BRIAN Pl;ease check my poems ~ Thanks B
December 9th, 2016 18:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL SPIRIT ~ A wonderful testimony to being BORN AGAIN and the release and power and love and freedom that comes from knowing JESUS ~ Thanks for sharing ~ HUGS BRIAN Pl;ease check my poems ~ Thanks B
December 9th, 2016 18:40
Dear Black Woman
Elegant_Style said:
:) :) :) Oh my gumdrops I loved this!! I especially liked your line, \"Our hair just happens to defy gravity/ So we wear it upon our head proudly like a Crown\" That line makes me think of my best friend and she would love this poem as much as I did
November 18th, 2016 21:55
Elegant_Style said:
:) :) :) Oh my gumdrops I loved this!! I especially liked your line, \"Our hair just happens to defy gravity/ So we wear it upon our head proudly like a Crown\" That line makes me think of my best friend and she would love this poem as much as I did
November 18th, 2016 21:55
Hebrew Israelite Woman
Augustus said:
I love this poem. It is beautifully written and sends an important message. I grew up in the 40\'s and the culture back then had not progressed to appreciate all of the qualities of women and particularly women whose skin tone was different. I struggled with these issues as a young man. Thank you.
November 17th, 2016 18:19
Augustus said:
I love this poem. It is beautifully written and sends an important message. I grew up in the 40\'s and the culture back then had not progressed to appreciate all of the qualities of women and particularly women whose skin tone was different. I struggled with these issues as a young man. Thank you.
November 17th, 2016 18:19
Hebrew Israelite Woman
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THIS IS SO SO BEAUTIFUL FRUITFUL SPIRIT ! As you know I treat all ladies with respect irrespective of class ~ color or creed. All the Jewish ladies I have met have been exceedingly beautiful and full of grace. True daughters of Abraham & Sarah. God made you perfect MY ANGEL and I am thrilled you appreciate that and have expressed your Pride as a Daughter of Jaweh in this perfect poem. Thanks for caring and sharing Love & Hugs in the Spirit ~ BRIAN
November 17th, 2016 11:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THIS IS SO SO BEAUTIFUL FRUITFUL SPIRIT ! As you know I treat all ladies with respect irrespective of class ~ color or creed. All the Jewish ladies I have met have been exceedingly beautiful and full of grace. True daughters of Abraham & Sarah. God made you perfect MY ANGEL and I am thrilled you appreciate that and have expressed your Pride as a Daughter of Jaweh in this perfect poem. Thanks for caring and sharing Love & Hugs in the Spirit ~ BRIAN
November 17th, 2016 11:29
Transformation
Augustus said:
This is a well constructed story with vivid pictures that flow effortlessly for the reader. It is a tribute to your faith. The rhyme has a freshness to it.
October 25th, 2016 18:53
Augustus said:
This is a well constructed story with vivid pictures that flow effortlessly for the reader. It is a tribute to your faith. The rhyme has a freshness to it.
October 25th, 2016 18:53
Awaited Proposal
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Some day BELOVED ~ Your PRINCE will come and love you with a Spiritual Love which will lift you both to a higher emotional plane ~ AMEN. I\'m still single so I\'m praying your prayer as well for a PARTNER made in Heaven Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my latest poems ~ Yours BRIAN Love the picture ~ very transcendental !
October 24th, 2016 11:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Some day BELOVED ~ Your PRINCE will come and love you with a Spiritual Love which will lift you both to a higher emotional plane ~ AMEN. I\'m still single so I\'m praying your prayer as well for a PARTNER made in Heaven Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my latest poems ~ Yours BRIAN Love the picture ~ very transcendental !
October 24th, 2016 11:06
Loved Deadly and Blind
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds like great advise
October 18th, 2016 01:28
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds like great advise
October 18th, 2016 01:28
The Covenant
Augustus said:
Reads nicely. Love the camera metaphor. Nice tribute to your faith.
October 14th, 2016 21:13
Augustus said:
Reads nicely. Love the camera metaphor. Nice tribute to your faith.
October 14th, 2016 21:13
The Covenant
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN SISTER ~ Lovely Testimony ~ We all need a SPIRITUAL CLEANSING and each person of the Trinity plays their part. God the Father holds us in His Hand 24/7 ~ Jesus died to cleanse us from ALL our SIN and the HOLY SPIRIT fills us with Love ~ Joy ~ Peace etc the 9 Fruit of the Spirit \' If GOD shall cleanse you you will be cleansed indeed ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ LOVE in the SPIRIT BRIAN
October 14th, 2016 17:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN SISTER ~ Lovely Testimony ~ We all need a SPIRITUAL CLEANSING and each person of the Trinity plays their part. God the Father holds us in His Hand 24/7 ~ Jesus died to cleanse us from ALL our SIN and the HOLY SPIRIT fills us with Love ~ Joy ~ Peace etc the 9 Fruit of the Spirit \' If GOD shall cleanse you you will be cleansed indeed ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ LOVE in the SPIRIT BRIAN
October 14th, 2016 17:43
The Place
Jeff said:
This is an excellent write...my favorite so far of yours...great job
October 1st, 2016 20:46
Jeff said:
This is an excellent write...my favorite so far of yours...great job
October 1st, 2016 20:46
Your Secret Admirer
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL ~ ANGEL ~ I'D LOVE TO BE ADMIRED LIKE THAT ~ BUT OPENLY NOT SECRETLY ! Love you and admire you as always ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my latest Poem GIVE and You will RECEIVE ~ Thanks B
September 24th, 2016 17:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL ~ ANGEL ~ I'D LOVE TO BE ADMIRED LIKE THAT ~ BUT OPENLY NOT SECRETLY ! Love you and admire you as always ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my latest Poem GIVE and You will RECEIVE ~ Thanks B
September 24th, 2016 17:37
Commit, Surrender, Submit
FruitfulSpirit said:
Thank you Brain Yah. Has been really dealing with me
September 17th, 2016 17:06
FruitfulSpirit said:
Thank you Brain Yah. Has been really dealing with me
September 17th, 2016 17:06
Commit, Surrender, Submit
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for the hymn ANGEL ~ great message ~ Only believe God's got a hold on me and He's taking care of me ~ I believe ~ Ohhh I believe.! Thanks for your poem with its very powerful message encouraging us all to Commit ~ Surrender ~ Submit our lives to GOD ~ Thanks Sister ~ AMEN Love ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my latest poems ~ Thanks B XOX
September 17th, 2016 17:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for the hymn ANGEL ~ great message ~ Only believe God's got a hold on me and He's taking care of me ~ I believe ~ Ohhh I believe.! Thanks for your poem with its very powerful message encouraging us all to Commit ~ Surrender ~ Submit our lives to GOD ~ Thanks Sister ~ AMEN Love ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my latest poems ~ Thanks B XOX
September 17th, 2016 17:03
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