Comments received on poems by Arevalolo
My Former Doom
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is really good, and it could bee made into a HIT SONG brutha..8u may wanna think about marketing it in that way other than just as poetry..
September 6th, 2016 14:42
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is really good, and it could bee made into a HIT SONG brutha..8u may wanna think about marketing it in that way other than just as poetry..
September 6th, 2016 14:42
Like The Night
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AREVA ~ Thanks you for a very elegant first poem ~ lovely structure ~ throbbing with rhyme and rhythm ! The main subject is the Brown Eyed Girl who has captured your heart ! It's not just her eyes it the whole of a very beautiful Girl ~ Truly a time consuming masterpiece of GOD ! I agree Brown Eyed Girls are very special and their eyes really are the Windows if their Souls. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
August 31st, 2016 15:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AREVA ~ Thanks you for a very elegant first poem ~ lovely structure ~ throbbing with rhyme and rhythm ! The main subject is the Brown Eyed Girl who has captured your heart ! It's not just her eyes it the whole of a very beautiful Girl ~ Truly a time consuming masterpiece of GOD ! I agree Brown Eyed Girls are very special and their eyes really are the Windows if their Souls. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
August 31st, 2016 15:49
