Hands
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks JAM for a very beautiful poem ~ In structure and subject. A pair of perfect hands is one of the most precious and useful gifts fro the Creator. So manipulative so tactile. Take care of your hands they are priceless. I love to hold a tool but better still I love to feel my hand in my lovers hand ! She touches my fingertips and my heart is aglow ............ BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B

September 22nd, 2016 04:31

Irony: Self-Destruct How to Watch Your Soul Die
Augustus said:

Diary of depression.
Well done.

September 13th, 2016 18:22

Gazing
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME MM ~ Thanks for your first poem. GAZING is an apt title for a poem which is written in awe of your first meeting with your (now) regular Girl Friend. Stanza 1. Discomfort ~ nervous ~ pain ! S 2. Dwelling on imperfection ? S 3. Locking eyes with your new GF brings anxiety !S 4. I like this one Lost in the moment ~ Lost in her gaze ! S 5. Is this you way of saying you were falling in LOVE ? Thanks for sharing ~ such an interesting poemi ~ BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B

September 8th, 2016 17:16