Comments received on poems by coryjarbeau
Now before its too late
Abel said:
Gues we suffer the same.. ;)
But its never too late to ask for a second chance..
April 6th, 2017 03:34
Abel said:
Gues we suffer the same.. ;)
But its never too late to ask for a second chance..
April 6th, 2017 03:34
Darkness is the place I lay
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CORY for another vey poignant poem sharing with us all just how you feel since your loss. Again beautifully written and I like the way you have spaced it. Stanza 1. You describe your emotions and you can't be set free from your darkness. S 2. Chained and taking pills S 3. Alcohol cannot release the pain S 4. Eating you alive,. Thinking of you and praying for 24/7 ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my latest poem.
September 15th, 2016 03:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CORY for another vey poignant poem sharing with us all just how you feel since your loss. Again beautifully written and I like the way you have spaced it. Stanza 1. You describe your emotions and you can't be set free from your darkness. S 2. Chained and taking pills S 3. Alcohol cannot release the pain S 4. Eating you alive,. Thinking of you and praying for 24/7 ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my latest poem.
September 15th, 2016 03:48
Darkness is the place I lay
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CORY for another vey poignant poem sharing with us all just how you feel since your loss. Again beautifully written and I like the way you have spaced it. Stanza 1. You describe your emotions and you can't be set free from your darkness. S 2. Chained and taking pills S 3. Alcohol cannot release the pain S 4. Eating you alive,. Thinking of you and praying for 24/7 ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my latest poem.
September 15th, 2016 03:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CORY for another vey poignant poem sharing with us all just how you feel since your loss. Again beautifully written and I like the way you have spaced it. Stanza 1. You describe your emotions and you can't be set free from your darkness. S 2. Chained and taking pills S 3. Alcohol cannot release the pain S 4. Eating you alive,. Thinking of you and praying for 24/7 ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my latest poem.
September 15th, 2016 03:48
Loved but not forgotten
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CORY ~ Thank you for an excellent first Poem. It is a well penned "free verse" with enugh rhythm to complement the subject "Lost Love". As we get older (I;m 33) it is a Subject we face in our Family and Friends Circles. If it is one's wife or partner it is much harder to bear. Your poem suggests a partner taken by death and the only reunion is in "dream world". Gone but not forgotten. You have expressed the sorrow and pain of the loss with both passion and compasion. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
September 11th, 2016 15:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CORY ~ Thank you for an excellent first Poem. It is a well penned "free verse" with enugh rhythm to complement the subject "Lost Love". As we get older (I;m 33) it is a Subject we face in our Family and Friends Circles. If it is one's wife or partner it is much harder to bear. Your poem suggests a partner taken by death and the only reunion is in "dream world". Gone but not forgotten. You have expressed the sorrow and pain of the loss with both passion and compasion. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
September 11th, 2016 15:43
Loved but not forgotten
Jeff said:
Excellent write here ...great job. I deal with this very issue daily. Very well done
September 11th, 2016 14:40
Jeff said:
Excellent write here ...great job. I deal with this very issue daily. Very well done
September 11th, 2016 14:40
