Comments received on poems by JoshuaConklin
Please forgive me
mvvenkataraman said:
Heart is exactly like a glass/
Once it is broken by oversight/
Attaching will be damn tough/
As it is controlled by mind/
A wound caused by fire/
May heal one day surely/
But, an unkind word told/
May cause unending pain/
Never take love for granted/
Whatever may be your sex/
Love is a holy feeling indeed/
Please repeat not the blunder/
mvvenkataraman
July 19th, 2013 13:37
mvvenkataraman said:
Heart is exactly like a glass/
Once it is broken by oversight/
Attaching will be damn tough/
As it is controlled by mind/
A wound caused by fire/
May heal one day surely/
But, an unkind word told/
May cause unending pain/
Never take love for granted/
Whatever may be your sex/
Love is a holy feeling indeed/
Please repeat not the blunder/
mvvenkataraman
July 19th, 2013 13:37
Death
diamonddagger said:
Very sad, you draw your audience in and leave a sad empty spot.
great work. have a great day, diamond
March 6th, 2013 19:01
diamonddagger said:
Very sad, you draw your audience in and leave a sad empty spot.
great work. have a great day, diamond
March 6th, 2013 19:01
The forgotten one
Dolphine29 said:
I hope you find it.. in many ways we all do.
Very deep and sad but still full of hope, that is what makes us strong.
Best
Dolphine
March 28th, 2011 19:11
Dolphine29 said:
I hope you find it.. in many ways we all do.
Very deep and sad but still full of hope, that is what makes us strong.
Best
Dolphine
March 28th, 2011 19:11
Nikki
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a beautiful tribute to your relationship and her....sad, sweet, and longing and loving.
February 1st, 2011 15:28
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a beautiful tribute to your relationship and her....sad, sweet, and longing and loving.
February 1st, 2011 15:28
Please forgive me
Cheeky Missy said:
Well-written. You hint at the reason she needs to forgive, and if she loves you, she must forgive....I hope she does. It's a bittersweet cry, with almost a hopeful, or rather insistent plea,...to be forgiven, which we cannot demand, and cannot really live without, it seems. Nicely done.
January 31st, 2011 22:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Well-written. You hint at the reason she needs to forgive, and if she loves you, she must forgive....I hope she does. It's a bittersweet cry, with almost a hopeful, or rather insistent plea,...to be forgiven, which we cannot demand, and cannot really live without, it seems. Nicely done.
January 31st, 2011 22:53
Death
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You've excellently depicted the feelings, sentiments, condition. Deadening....... Excellent!! And so very grievous. You make me begin to feel it.
January 26th, 2011 00:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You've excellently depicted the feelings, sentiments, condition. Deadening....... Excellent!! And so very grievous. You make me begin to feel it.
January 26th, 2011 00:17
True Love
Cheeky Missy said:
That is very sweet she is with you and can be a comfort and help to you when you are so low and suffering....may it truly be true love and endure forever.
January 25th, 2011 09:11
Cheeky Missy said:
That is very sweet she is with you and can be a comfort and help to you when you are so low and suffering....may it truly be true love and endure forever.
January 25th, 2011 09:11
