Comments received on poems by fob.lina
What I Know Now...
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in this poem. I am working on one with the same theme but it has a way to go still. Keep up the good work
October 14th, 2025 18:19
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in this poem. I am working on one with the same theme but it has a way to go still. Keep up the good work
October 14th, 2025 18:19
Wonder
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem! Your second stanza is hauntingly good, I can relate.
October 31st, 2016 19:55
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem! Your second stanza is hauntingly good, I can relate.
October 31st, 2016 19:55
Innocence
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FL ~ Thank you for your first poem ~ elegantly penned and a salutary message. We all get judged especially when we reach our Teens. What we wear ~ how we look ~ who we hang with and what we do and where we go ! It's Itard for both Yin and Yang ! I'm 33 and I still care abouit my image. Youir meditative poem made me think ~ thanks for sharing ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN ~ UK
September 30th, 2016 13:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FL ~ Thank you for your first poem ~ elegantly penned and a salutary message. We all get judged especially when we reach our Teens. What we wear ~ how we look ~ who we hang with and what we do and where we go ! It's Itard for both Yin and Yang ! I'm 33 and I still care abouit my image. Youir meditative poem made me think ~ thanks for sharing ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN ~ UK
September 30th, 2016 13:54
