Comments received on poems by DezyraSatyre
Severed Eyes
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Dark poem in great sublime wording. The stark phrasing and word choice is also very poetic and eloquent. Kudos.
Pls do comment my latest poem too. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 14th, 2016 08:26
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Dark poem in great sublime wording. The stark phrasing and word choice is also very poetic and eloquent. Kudos.
Pls do comment my latest poem too. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 14th, 2016 08:26
Severed Eyes
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING DEZYRA ~ Today is Remembrance Day in the UK and it reads like a heartfelt tribute to all the millions who died in Battle to purchase our freedom. Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN
November 13th, 2016 12:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING DEZYRA ~ Today is Remembrance Day in the UK and it reads like a heartfelt tribute to all the millions who died in Battle to purchase our freedom. Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN
November 13th, 2016 12:33
JADE
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I agree, Beautifully done...You definitely have talent my friend...xxoo
October 4th, 2016 05:58
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I agree, Beautifully done...You definitely have talent my friend...xxoo
October 4th, 2016 05:58
JADE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DEZYRA and the very beautiful picture of beautiful you and your beautiful daughter. It made the bitter sweet poem more poignant. I looked at the photo and read your poem again and cried for you and thought just how cruel life can be. Please live in the expectation of a blessed reunion in the Glory. Believe this life is NOT all here there is ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
October 3rd, 2016 17:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DEZYRA and the very beautiful picture of beautiful you and your beautiful daughter. It made the bitter sweet poem more poignant. I looked at the photo and read your poem again and cried for you and thought just how cruel life can be. Please live in the expectation of a blessed reunion in the Glory. Believe this life is NOT all here there is ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
October 3rd, 2016 17:35
Beautiful Disguise
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you DESYRA ~ for a perfectly penned poem with a timely message ! "Though the outer Man perish ~ the inner Man can be renewed every day! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ B
October 2nd, 2016 09:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you DESYRA ~ for a perfectly penned poem with a timely message ! "Though the outer Man perish ~ the inner Man can be renewed every day! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ B
October 2nd, 2016 09:22
Blood Solace in a Eulogy
P.X. Vexxus said:
This poem tells a tale, of sorrow and grief. But within the poem, you found yourself, within the mother you lost. Keep your head held high, and your emotions strong. Nothing will tear you down. I really liked the poem, the title caught my eye. I try to read everything posted everyday, so i can grow and learn from my mistakes. I hope to see another of yours someday.
October 1st, 2016 14:50
P.X. Vexxus said:
This poem tells a tale, of sorrow and grief. But within the poem, you found yourself, within the mother you lost. Keep your head held high, and your emotions strong. Nothing will tear you down. I really liked the poem, the title caught my eye. I try to read everything posted everyday, so i can grow and learn from my mistakes. I hope to see another of yours someday.
October 1st, 2016 14:50
Blood Solace in a Eulogy
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Absolutely stunning piece of literary genius here hun...seriously ...Please, I would like to welcome you here to this site personally. I only started publishing my work here recently...have about 45 or so please read my work and comment at your leisure..I have a hunch that it will be to your interest... your work reminds me of much of my earlier stuff...so I am going to request your friendship and I look forward to reading more ..take care and keep writing!!
October 1st, 2016 08:34
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Absolutely stunning piece of literary genius here hun...seriously ...Please, I would like to welcome you here to this site personally. I only started publishing my work here recently...have about 45 or so please read my work and comment at your leisure..I have a hunch that it will be to your interest... your work reminds me of much of my earlier stuff...so I am going to request your friendship and I look forward to reading more ..take care and keep writing!!
October 1st, 2016 08:34
Blood Solace in a Eulogy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEZYRA ~ Thank you for a very powerful first poem and visual. My relationship with my mother is very strong so I can empathize with the underling message of your poem. I owe my life to my mother as do you and if she is no longer with you I can understand the essence of your agony. I find this poem very moving ~ I trust you found it cathartic. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
October 1st, 2016 05:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEZYRA ~ Thank you for a very powerful first poem and visual. My relationship with my mother is very strong so I can empathize with the underling message of your poem. I owe my life to my mother as do you and if she is no longer with you I can understand the essence of your agony. I find this poem very moving ~ I trust you found it cathartic. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
October 1st, 2016 05:49
