Comments received on poems by Angel Smileyface
The Dress She thinks She Looks Good In
Simple-Man87 said:
Very well written. I suffer in my own ways and am right there with you. Hit home... it did indeed.
August 30th, 2017 14:23
Simple-Man87 said:
Very well written. I suffer in my own ways and am right there with you. Hit home... it did indeed.
August 30th, 2017 14:23
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Simple-Man87 said:
You don\'t deserve a life like that. There are still men who crave intimacy, love and are romantic. All we want is a woman to allow us to do that. You are very talented and I look forward to reading more from you.
August 30th, 2017 13:52
Simple-Man87 said:
You don\'t deserve a life like that. There are still men who crave intimacy, love and are romantic. All we want is a woman to allow us to do that. You are very talented and I look forward to reading more from you.
August 30th, 2017 13:52
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dusk arising said:
I agree with Santita\'s comments wholeheartedly. I\'m one of the old romantics on here too. I\'ll tell u a secret. Not many young men have got the faintest idea of how to be romantic or the ability to let a lady feel she is being romanced. It\'s a thing a man learns about as he watches the years go past. They\'re there if you want to attract them. Good writing there.
August 25th, 2017 12:59
dusk arising said:
I agree with Santita\'s comments wholeheartedly. I\'m one of the old romantics on here too. I\'ll tell u a secret. Not many young men have got the faintest idea of how to be romantic or the ability to let a lady feel she is being romanced. It\'s a thing a man learns about as he watches the years go past. They\'re there if you want to attract them. Good writing there.
August 25th, 2017 12:59
All She wants
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh ANGEL ~ You pour so much love and angst into a single poem it makes me want to cry ! You are so so lovely ! Birthdays are always very special when you are a Teen ~ there were Girls I liked (and loved !) but i always wanted a Special Girl to be with me on my Birthday ~ sometimes I had one (Heaven ) sometimes I didn\'t (Hell). This relationship seems very complex all the Girl wants (on 8th May) is to lie in bed and be kissed and cuddled all day ! I could do that but many Teen Boys don\'t understand what Teen Girls really need ~ is to be cherished and not ravished. I am praying that the dilemma will be resolved and and you will get all the cuddles you need and want on Monday 8th May ! Blessings and Cuddles ~ BRIAN XOX
May 1st, 2017 11:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh ANGEL ~ You pour so much love and angst into a single poem it makes me want to cry ! You are so so lovely ! Birthdays are always very special when you are a Teen ~ there were Girls I liked (and loved !) but i always wanted a Special Girl to be with me on my Birthday ~ sometimes I had one (Heaven ) sometimes I didn\'t (Hell). This relationship seems very complex all the Girl wants (on 8th May) is to lie in bed and be kissed and cuddled all day ! I could do that but many Teen Boys don\'t understand what Teen Girls really need ~ is to be cherished and not ravished. I am praying that the dilemma will be resolved and and you will get all the cuddles you need and want on Monday 8th May ! Blessings and Cuddles ~ BRIAN XOX
May 1st, 2017 11:01
All She wants
WriteBeLight said:
Great job expressing the pain and hurt. Happy Birthday. Hope she gets what she wants. She deserves to be happy!
May 1st, 2017 10:55
WriteBeLight said:
Great job expressing the pain and hurt. Happy Birthday. Hope she gets what she wants. She deserves to be happy!
May 1st, 2017 10:55
The Dress She thinks She Looks Good In
LML said:
Your right! It\'s so sad to see how people words and actions can hurt others. The show 13 reasons why really reviled that, and so did ur poem
April 30th, 2017 18:39
LML said:
Your right! It\'s so sad to see how people words and actions can hurt others. The show 13 reasons why really reviled that, and so did ur poem
April 30th, 2017 18:39
The Dress She thinks She Looks Good In
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANGEL ~ Thanks for sharing another fine poem ~ straight from your understanding heart. I don\'t like skinny girls ~ but unfortunately it\'s the fashion. I am pleased you are happy with the way God made you. Sometimes I\'m glad I\'m a male because we were less catty in the showers ~ size of course was important when we clocked each other in the showers ! We liked to wear designers trainers etc and hairstyle is important for Boys but we never got catty about how we dressed. I love \"Your kind of BEAUTIFUL\" and to be content with how you look dress and act is a great Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN
April 30th, 2017 10:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANGEL ~ Thanks for sharing another fine poem ~ straight from your understanding heart. I don\'t like skinny girls ~ but unfortunately it\'s the fashion. I am pleased you are happy with the way God made you. Sometimes I\'m glad I\'m a male because we were less catty in the showers ~ size of course was important when we clocked each other in the showers ! We liked to wear designers trainers etc and hairstyle is important for Boys but we never got catty about how we dressed. I love \"Your kind of BEAUTIFUL\" and to be content with how you look dress and act is a great Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN
April 30th, 2017 10:53
Why dont they understand that.........
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for your POEM ANGEL ~ it contains a lot of good advice especially for JOCKS whose brains are in their trousers. Like all MEN I like ladies ~ and the trouble you all take to look good ~ scent and taste nice and I know you like to be hugged and talk and laugh and dance and enjoy life. I am a Gentleman and I never assume a Lady will want sex and if she says no I respect that ~ to me the delight of her company is much more important than intercourse. Some MEN just want to come and go and miss out on the other 99% every lady (in my experience) has to offer. You also mention verbal abuse etc and that is just as damaging as physical & sexual abuse. Thanks for reminding us to be GENTLEMEN ~ sometimes I\'m ashamed to be a MAN ~ Gentle Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 29th, 2017 09:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for your POEM ANGEL ~ it contains a lot of good advice especially for JOCKS whose brains are in their trousers. Like all MEN I like ladies ~ and the trouble you all take to look good ~ scent and taste nice and I know you like to be hugged and talk and laugh and dance and enjoy life. I am a Gentleman and I never assume a Lady will want sex and if she says no I respect that ~ to me the delight of her company is much more important than intercourse. Some MEN just want to come and go and miss out on the other 99% every lady (in my experience) has to offer. You also mention verbal abuse etc and that is just as damaging as physical & sexual abuse. Thanks for reminding us to be GENTLEMEN ~ sometimes I\'m ashamed to be a MAN ~ Gentle Hugs ~ BRIAN
April 29th, 2017 09:39
Why dont they understand that.........
WriteBeLight said:
I agree with the last line in particular! Very good work.
April 29th, 2017 07:34
WriteBeLight said:
I agree with the last line in particular! Very good work.
April 29th, 2017 07:34
His hearing
Augustus said:
Sounds like someone close to you did something awful. Nice free verse.
March 9th, 2017 19:38
Augustus said:
Sounds like someone close to you did something awful. Nice free verse.
March 9th, 2017 19:38
Tragic
JohnThomas said:
Sadly we are too worried about what others think of us. We must learn to be happy with who we are and not what others want us to be.
Great poem. 😎
October 4th, 2016 22:14
JohnThomas said:
Sadly we are too worried about what others think of us. We must learn to be happy with who we are and not what others want us to be.
Great poem. 😎
October 4th, 2016 22:14
Saturday
Jeff said:
This is a very well done piece...sad as it is. Great write
October 4th, 2016 04:25
Jeff said:
This is a very well done piece...sad as it is. Great write
October 4th, 2016 04:25
Saturday
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANGEL ~ This is so so tragic ~ I trust you found some comfort in sharing it. I for one am thinking of you and praying for you.. Friends of mine have killed someone (accidently) in a car rash and it haunts them for ever. Some came close to suicide but we were able to be with them and pull them through, Don't torture yourself for not doing more at least you spoke with him. It is a hard burden for you to bear so young ~ I trust you have people to console you ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN
October 3rd, 2016 13:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANGEL ~ This is so so tragic ~ I trust you found some comfort in sharing it. I for one am thinking of you and praying for you.. Friends of mine have killed someone (accidently) in a car rash and it haunts them for ever. Some came close to suicide but we were able to be with them and pull them through, Don't torture yourself for not doing more at least you spoke with him. It is a hard burden for you to bear so young ~ I trust you have people to console you ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN
October 3rd, 2016 13:27
I Ran
Mads said:
Great job I loved it and I related to it very much because I'm almost 16 and did the same exact things. We probably have a lot in common.
October 2nd, 2016 12:39
Mads said:
Great job I loved it and I related to it very much because I'm almost 16 and did the same exact things. We probably have a lot in common.
October 2nd, 2016 12:39
I Ran
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANGEL ~ Thanks for a very elegantly written firt poem ~ but with a painful content. Life is tough in the 21st C when you are a Teen ~ I was 16 just as the new Century dawned and I didn't cut but I di stupid things to cope with the stress and angst ! otsof my Female friends ran and cut ( which is cathartic but dangerous) so I can empathise ! We survived ~ I'm still single but have a group of supportive Friends and Family which is important. Thanks for sharing more please ! Thinking of you and suportung you ~ thanks for being my FRIEND ~ Yours BRIAN
October 2nd, 2016 02:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANGEL ~ Thanks for a very elegantly written firt poem ~ but with a painful content. Life is tough in the 21st C when you are a Teen ~ I was 16 just as the new Century dawned and I didn't cut but I di stupid things to cope with the stress and angst ! otsof my Female friends ran and cut ( which is cathartic but dangerous) so I can empathise ! We survived ~ I'm still single but have a group of supportive Friends and Family which is important. Thanks for sharing more please ! Thinking of you and suportung you ~ thanks for being my FRIEND ~ Yours BRIAN
October 2nd, 2016 02:27
