Comments received on poems by amelliawagg

Why we won\'t last
IAmBeu said:

Oh wow. Any amount of praise would still be an understatement...very good. The feeling i get is one of anguished resignation, very poignant writing!

May 26th, 2017 01:00

Why we won\'t last
Louis Gibbs said:

Well written piece! Your relationship sounds all too familiar to me. But then, there is always the \'attraction of opposites\' factor at play, a balancing effect ... perhaps?

May 25th, 2017 22:30

Love and other weird things
Esmeraldaya said:

This is so true. Romance books and movies give us unrealistic expectations. Maybe we should all be grateful for what we have rather than think about all the ways it lacks in comparison to the books or movies.

May 25th, 2017 21:57

Why we won\'t last
Esmeraldaya said:

I\'m so sorry that you relationship didn\'t work out. This was very insightful and gave readers and in-depth look into your every thought.

May 25th, 2017 21:55

God of Wonders
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Great longing cry to the Maker of all things, visible and invisible; the cosmic longing that stretches the hole in one\'s heart. Thanks for sharing your anguish. Know that you are not alone. That which you seek is indeed there; why else would your \'heartstrings\' be pulled in that direction?

May 25th, 2017 21:48

Why we won\'t last
valene said:

WOW! you\'ve obviously given the relationship you speak of a great deal of thought. I\'m impressed by your insight as to who you both are and why this relationship can\'t move forward. I think it\'s well written and i like your use of metaphors thruout. they make for a more powerful read and help to get your reasons across. i also feel a bit sad for both of you :(

May 25th, 2017 21:14

White mind
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Nice creative play with temporal movement and color!

May 3rd, 2017 22:49

White mind
LML said:


May 3rd, 2017 22:21

God of Wonders
ron parrish aka wordman said:

touching write

October 20th, 2016 22:37

God of Wonders
Christina K said:

This is awesome! I love it

October 20th, 2016 22:31

stars and skies

WELCOME AMELIA ~ Thanks for an elegant first poem ~ with a futuristic twist ! In this life ~ generally ~ we are earth bound creatures ~ but we all have visions and flights if fancy which transport us to the Astral Planes you mention. However in reality (like your Lady) "We are here ~ sky above ~ earth below ~ longing for more ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

October 7th, 2016 10:55