Comments received on poems by vanabba3
Dinner for Two and Death Would Like Tea
Tony36 said:
Awesome, Awesome, Awesome
October 8th, 2016 08:32
Tony36 said:
Awesome, Awesome, Awesome
October 8th, 2016 08:32
Dinner for Two and Death Would Like Tea
Whimsical_1 said:
Michael,
You really outdid yourself on this one! I love the personification of death and the articulate imagery. I'm not sure if this was your intention, but it's worded as if the narrator kills death. I found it a very amusing and insiteful finish to this piece.
What lengths one will go to, to survive. I suppose the other way you could look at the ending is the narrator is discussed because he wanted to die, but he went through the feat. of the tea because he's scared of his fate. Please tell me what you intended, especially if it is neither of them! Again, great work
October 8th, 2016 07:00
Whimsical_1 said:
Michael,
You really outdid yourself on this one! I love the personification of death and the articulate imagery. I'm not sure if this was your intention, but it's worded as if the narrator kills death. I found it a very amusing and insiteful finish to this piece.
What lengths one will go to, to survive. I suppose the other way you could look at the ending is the narrator is discussed because he wanted to die, but he went through the feat. of the tea because he's scared of his fate. Please tell me what you intended, especially if it is neither of them! Again, great work
October 8th, 2016 07:00
Monster in My Closet
Augustus said:
Your message came through clearly and by morning some one was going to have a knife in the chest. And yes boy/girl--mom/dad/ uncle Fred. Thanks.
October 7th, 2016 22:13
Augustus said:
Your message came through clearly and by morning some one was going to have a knife in the chest. And yes boy/girl--mom/dad/ uncle Fred. Thanks.
October 7th, 2016 22:13
Beware!
Alda said:
so true!! as a parent I can feel all the fears. As a child I only felt the fun.
October 7th, 2016 20:17
Alda said:
so true!! as a parent I can feel all the fears. As a child I only felt the fun.
October 7th, 2016 20:17
Monster in My Closet
VhladTheGreat said:
I could imagine that this is how my Ex feels...
October 7th, 2016 18:39
VhladTheGreat said:
I could imagine that this is how my Ex feels...
October 7th, 2016 18:39
Beware!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HALLOWEEN ~ is the best of time and the worst of times ! Because it's spooky and fantasy Parents let their children out and about dressed very spooky and they knock on doors and challenge strangers to TRICK or TREAT. We have to be dilligent ! At Church we have a LIGHT PARTY for about 50 kids with FUN & GAMES But under supervision ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
October 7th, 2016 11:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HALLOWEEN ~ is the best of time and the worst of times ! Because it's spooky and fantasy Parents let their children out and about dressed very spooky and they knock on doors and challenge strangers to TRICK or TREAT. We have to be dilligent ! At Church we have a LIGHT PARTY for about 50 kids with FUN & GAMES But under supervision ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
October 7th, 2016 11:10
Beware!
Whimsical_1 said:
This is great!! I have no words. I really like the flow and the spooky Halloween feel but it's more than just that. Or I may be reading to deep into this, but for me it's more of a heading of everyday life that people only seem to enforced when they feel compelled
October 6th, 2016 22:34
Whimsical_1 said:
This is great!! I have no words. I really like the flow and the spooky Halloween feel but it's more than just that. Or I may be reading to deep into this, but for me it's more of a heading of everyday life that people only seem to enforced when they feel compelled
October 6th, 2016 22:34
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