Comments received on poems by scorchedwings
The Battle of Mind and Love
magno1988 said:
Loved this! A piece of perfection!
November 13th, 2016 04:17
magno1988 said:
Loved this! A piece of perfection!
November 13th, 2016 04:17
The Battle of Mind and Love
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful rhyming piece of work with good cadence. Good job!
November 1st, 2016 13:08
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful rhyming piece of work with good cadence. Good job!
November 1st, 2016 13:08
The Battle of Mind and Love
Augustus said:
This is such a lovely piece of work. Too bad in our world today many if not most live in their minds.
November 1st, 2016 08:37
Augustus said:
This is such a lovely piece of work. Too bad in our world today many if not most live in their minds.
November 1st, 2016 08:37
The Battle of Mind and Love
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Great rhyming here and lots of muse to appreciate. I like many lines in metaphor esp, , \'love lives as an autocrat\' , and mind lies like a foetus, wow that was of those creatively thought up and phrased swell. So thumbs up and I do hope to read more from u.
Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 1st, 2016 02:00
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Great rhyming here and lots of muse to appreciate. I like many lines in metaphor esp, , \'love lives as an autocrat\' , and mind lies like a foetus, wow that was of those creatively thought up and phrased swell. So thumbs up and I do hope to read more from u.
Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 1st, 2016 02:00
Moth to Flame
Augustus said:
There are a number of things I like about this poem. First, I was amazed at the steps/process of moth to flame. The reader is tantilizing drawn with the moth on its journey. Second, it reads like a piece of music starting softly, then deliberately, and continued to build to a crescendo. Well done and welcome.
October 31st, 2016 18:54
Augustus said:
There are a number of things I like about this poem. First, I was amazed at the steps/process of moth to flame. The reader is tantilizing drawn with the moth on its journey. Second, it reads like a piece of music starting softly, then deliberately, and continued to build to a crescendo. Well done and welcome.
October 31st, 2016 18:54
Moth to Flame
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SW ~ Awesome first poem. ~ pulsating with rhyme and rhythm. Love rhyming couplets ~ makes it lovely to read and easy to recite ! Love the subject MOTH TO FLAME ~ This is the title of a Jim Reeves song \"LIKE A MOTH TO A FLAME\" about his LADY being drawn in by the bright lights of the CITY. Your poem has a sad but fitting end the MOTH and the FLAME become one ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ B
October 31st, 2016 15:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SW ~ Awesome first poem. ~ pulsating with rhyme and rhythm. Love rhyming couplets ~ makes it lovely to read and easy to recite ! Love the subject MOTH TO FLAME ~ This is the title of a Jim Reeves song \"LIKE A MOTH TO A FLAME\" about his LADY being drawn in by the bright lights of the CITY. Your poem has a sad but fitting end the MOTH and the FLAME become one ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ B
October 31st, 2016 15:51
Moth to Flame
Liam Lawless said:
Amazing First Poem. Very Enticing. Lovely Work.
October 31st, 2016 13:38
Liam Lawless said:
Amazing First Poem. Very Enticing. Lovely Work.
October 31st, 2016 13:38
