Comments received on poems by scorchedwings



The Battle of Mind and Love
magno1988 said:

Loved this! A piece of perfection!

November 13th, 2016 04:17

The Battle of Mind and Love
Tony36 said:

Beautifully Awesome write

November 1st, 2016 13:31

The Battle of Mind and Love
Christina8 said:

This is a beautiful rhyming piece of work with good cadence. Good job!

November 1st, 2016 13:08

The Battle of Mind and Love
Augustus said:

This is such a lovely piece of work. Too bad in our world today many if not most live in their minds.

November 1st, 2016 08:37

The Battle of Mind and Love
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Great rhyming here and lots of muse to appreciate. I like many lines in metaphor esp, , \'love lives as an autocrat\' , and mind lies like a foetus, wow that was of those creatively thought up and phrased swell. So thumbs up and I do hope to read more from u.


Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.


November 1st, 2016 02:00

Moth to Flame
Augustus said:

There are a number of things I like about this poem. First, I was amazed at the steps/process of moth to flame. The reader is tantilizing drawn with the moth on its journey. Second, it reads like a piece of music starting softly, then deliberately, and continued to build to a crescendo. Well done and welcome.

October 31st, 2016 18:54

Moth to Flame
paddy68 said:

good rhythm

October 31st, 2016 18:20

Moth to Flame
magno1988 said:

Amazing!! Perfectly written!

October 31st, 2016 17:29

Moth to Flame
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME SW ~ Awesome first poem. ~ pulsating with rhyme and rhythm. Love rhyming couplets ~ makes it lovely to read and easy to recite ! Love the subject MOTH TO FLAME ~ This is the title of a Jim Reeves song \"LIKE A MOTH TO A FLAME\" about his LADY being drawn in by the bright lights of the CITY. Your poem has a sad but fitting end the MOTH and the FLAME become one ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ B

October 31st, 2016 15:51

Moth to Flame
Tony36 said:

Love it great write

October 31st, 2016 15:09

Moth to Flame
Anonamus said:

Amazing First Poem. Very Enticing. Lovely Work.

October 31st, 2016 13:38

Moth to Flame
Christina8 said:

Beautiful and amazing rhymes! Nice job!

October 31st, 2016 11:38