Comments received on poems by littlegoat23
Confusion
AlitaOpal said:
Thank you for your beautiful master piece. It seems as if though your poem was about me.. What a phenomena..
Thank you x
November 13th, 2016 20:50
AlitaOpal said:
Thank you for your beautiful master piece. It seems as if though your poem was about me.. What a phenomena..
Thank you x
November 13th, 2016 20:50
The River
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the river that runs through my soul,that leads me to an ocean of words and feelings,where i lay me down
November 6th, 2016 22:20
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the river that runs through my soul,that leads me to an ocean of words and feelings,where i lay me down
November 6th, 2016 22:20
The River
Christina8 said:
Beautifully written poem. Self harm is a deeply personal subject and I\'m glad you shared. Alot of us have gone through things like this. Hope you feel better!
November 6th, 2016 21:53
Christina8 said:
Beautifully written poem. Self harm is a deeply personal subject and I\'m glad you shared. Alot of us have gone through things like this. Hope you feel better!
November 6th, 2016 21:53
Hope
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow mixed feelings in great muse, as we all attempt to combine positivity with the negatives but only a poet can express so lyrically and hopefully. I detect a nice rhyme scheme here so thumbs up.
Pls do review my latest poem too. Ive been writing elsewhere and readers loved it or got sth frm it so I wish to share here too
November 2nd, 2016 01:28
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow mixed feelings in great muse, as we all attempt to combine positivity with the negatives but only a poet can express so lyrically and hopefully. I detect a nice rhyme scheme here so thumbs up.
Pls do review my latest poem too. Ive been writing elsewhere and readers loved it or got sth frm it so I wish to share here too
November 2nd, 2016 01:28
Hope
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LG ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST VERY CHALLENGING POEM. It is a well penned fee verse poem divided into digestible stanzas which gives it poetic rhythm. The message strikes a chord. All of are lives are a pattern of UPS & DOWNS so we all need HOPE ! For some there are more UPS than DOWNS (on balance I\'m like that !) and some more DOWNS than UPS ~ c\'est la vie ! Love the final couplet ~ Smile and make your future bright ~ One day the sun will shine ending this dreadful night ~ AMEN. Thanks foir sharing ~ more please BRIAN. Olease check my poems thanks ~ B
November 1st, 2016 14:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LG ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST VERY CHALLENGING POEM. It is a well penned fee verse poem divided into digestible stanzas which gives it poetic rhythm. The message strikes a chord. All of are lives are a pattern of UPS & DOWNS so we all need HOPE ! For some there are more UPS than DOWNS (on balance I\'m like that !) and some more DOWNS than UPS ~ c\'est la vie ! Love the final couplet ~ Smile and make your future bright ~ One day the sun will shine ending this dreadful night ~ AMEN. Thanks foir sharing ~ more please BRIAN. Olease check my poems thanks ~ B
November 1st, 2016 14:58
8-22-16
littlegoat23 said:
I hope this poem helps someone out there, and that all who read it enjoy. It took a lot of courage to post it.
October 31st, 2016 22:50
littlegoat23 said:
I hope this poem helps someone out there, and that all who read it enjoy. It took a lot of courage to post it.
October 31st, 2016 22:50
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