Comments received on poems by littlegoat23
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WriteBeLight said:
I hope you find your happiness littlegoat23. You deserve to be very happy. Very good poem.
April 19th, 2017 05:25
WriteBeLight said:
I hope you find your happiness littlegoat23. You deserve to be very happy. Very good poem.
April 19th, 2017 05:25
Questions left unanswered
Phoenix8523 said:
Wonderfully written and it speaks volumes. -- phoenix
January 7th, 2017 23:07
Phoenix8523 said:
Wonderfully written and it speaks volumes. -- phoenix
January 7th, 2017 23:07
Questions left unanswered
willyweed said:
You are correct the cycle must be broken. Great rant. ww
January 7th, 2017 22:29
willyweed said:
You are correct the cycle must be broken. Great rant. ww
January 7th, 2017 22:29
Where is the happy medium?
willyweed said:
Find you heart\'s delight and follow it
nice little write. ww
December 30th, 2016 13:59
willyweed said:
Find you heart\'s delight and follow it
nice little write. ww
December 30th, 2016 13:59
Where is the happy medium?
WriteBeLight said:
Very good. I am getting a feeling of wanting balance in life. It is hard to come by sometimes. It is either feast or famine. Nice work!
December 30th, 2016 12:50
WriteBeLight said:
Very good. I am getting a feeling of wanting balance in life. It is hard to come by sometimes. It is either feast or famine. Nice work!
December 30th, 2016 12:50
The Encounter
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very interesting..so did this \"encounter\"actually happen or is this just more of a story??
December 15th, 2016 21:33
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very interesting..so did this \"encounter\"actually happen or is this just more of a story??
December 15th, 2016 21:33
Pushing Forward
SabreLi said:
Such a poignant piece - despite what we all have to be grateful for (full capacity; food on the table; a roof over our head) we still feel lacking. This emotion is relative. And then comes the guilt, doubt and questions; why do we feel this way when we have a lot to be thankful for? Such a true message here, we\'ll done! :) xx
December 11th, 2016 08:11
SabreLi said:
Such a poignant piece - despite what we all have to be grateful for (full capacity; food on the table; a roof over our head) we still feel lacking. This emotion is relative. And then comes the guilt, doubt and questions; why do we feel this way when we have a lot to be thankful for? Such a true message here, we\'ll done! :) xx
December 11th, 2016 08:11
Pushing Forward
Elegant_Style said:
wow, this is amazing and i admire you for it. Continue to push on and keep writing!! you are special
December 10th, 2016 16:43
Elegant_Style said:
wow, this is amazing and i admire you for it. Continue to push on and keep writing!! you are special
December 10th, 2016 16:43
Frustration
Christina8 said:
You did just fine ;-) Just try to keep writing if you feel it helps because it helps others to know they aren\'t alone. Thanks for sharing.
November 29th, 2016 12:47
Christina8 said:
You did just fine ;-) Just try to keep writing if you feel it helps because it helps others to know they aren\'t alone. Thanks for sharing.
November 29th, 2016 12:47
The Truth
Elegant_Style said:
I just have to say you are beautiful. You are a truly special creation and your heart shines with light. That demon inside you is trying to stop your light from shining and that is why you have to fight.
Fight with all your strength, fight for your life. You are never alone and you never will be. I know that not everyone wants to hear this but you are in my prayers. I love you, truly and completely and forever.
Never give up...
November 24th, 2016 23:57
Elegant_Style said:
I just have to say you are beautiful. You are a truly special creation and your heart shines with light. That demon inside you is trying to stop your light from shining and that is why you have to fight.
Fight with all your strength, fight for your life. You are never alone and you never will be. I know that not everyone wants to hear this but you are in my prayers. I love you, truly and completely and forever.
Never give up...
November 24th, 2016 23:57
The Truth
SabreLi said:
You write of things that many people are unfortunate enough to experience, but unlike most that do you are strong enough to speak of them and, in doing so, you are helping others as you purge the demon from within your soul :) It is clear by the amount of effort which has so evidently gone into writing this powerful piece that you believe the words to be true, and in this case you should also believe that \"it is okay to feel this way\" because this is the first step in overcoming the evils which hold you back and bring you down. Sending support xx
November 24th, 2016 16:11
SabreLi said:
You write of things that many people are unfortunate enough to experience, but unlike most that do you are strong enough to speak of them and, in doing so, you are helping others as you purge the demon from within your soul :) It is clear by the amount of effort which has so evidently gone into writing this powerful piece that you believe the words to be true, and in this case you should also believe that \"it is okay to feel this way\" because this is the first step in overcoming the evils which hold you back and bring you down. Sending support xx
November 24th, 2016 16:11
The Truth
WriteBeLight said:
Thanks for posting your work. I think you have helped people with this. You are very brave. You should not loath anything about yourself. I wish for things to get much, much better for you.
November 24th, 2016 06:33
WriteBeLight said:
Thanks for posting your work. I think you have helped people with this. You are very brave. You should not loath anything about yourself. I wish for things to get much, much better for you.
November 24th, 2016 06:33
The Truth
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh SWEETHEART ~ YOUR ARE YOUNG AND VERY BEAUTIFUL ~ with your whole life before you ! We all love you and hate to see you depressed or sad ! I agree with FLEUR ~ KICK THE DEMON OUT OF YOUR YOUR LIFE ~ and blossom as the beautiful Rose GOD created you to be ! Love & HUGS ~ YOUR MPS FRIEND BRIAN
November 24th, 2016 05:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh SWEETHEART ~ YOUR ARE YOUNG AND VERY BEAUTIFUL ~ with your whole life before you ! We all love you and hate to see you depressed or sad ! I agree with FLEUR ~ KICK THE DEMON OUT OF YOUR YOUR LIFE ~ and blossom as the beautiful Rose GOD created you to be ! Love & HUGS ~ YOUR MPS FRIEND BRIAN
November 24th, 2016 05:09
The Truth
kalliefleur said:
wow little goat--this is a powerful and beautiful aching poem letter.
soak in all the beauty and love and kick that demon of self destruction to the curb.
Find something to laugh about. Keep Writing.
November 24th, 2016 00:55
kalliefleur said:
wow little goat--this is a powerful and beautiful aching poem letter.
soak in all the beauty and love and kick that demon of self destruction to the curb.
Find something to laugh about. Keep Writing.
November 24th, 2016 00:55
untitled
Christina8 said:
I loved your poem. Just keep trying to get the sadness out by writing. Looking forward to more!
November 22nd, 2016 10:56
Christina8 said:
I loved your poem. Just keep trying to get the sadness out by writing. Looking forward to more!
November 22nd, 2016 10:56
untitled
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes pls we need more of yor awesome rhyming poetry here, pls don\'t leave us,u r soo adorable. The poem is doleful but sadness expressed with yor talent is great to read and ought to cheer u in poetic ink. Warmest wishes n hugs,. Nice to read from u again but pls don\'t be sad. Just forget the pain n keep writing.
November 21st, 2016 23:17
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes pls we need more of yor awesome rhyming poetry here, pls don\'t leave us,u r soo adorable. The poem is doleful but sadness expressed with yor talent is great to read and ought to cheer u in poetic ink. Warmest wishes n hugs,. Nice to read from u again but pls don\'t be sad. Just forget the pain n keep writing.
November 21st, 2016 23:17
untitled
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh LG ~ this is such a sad poem ~ Please don\'t leave us ~ We all love you ! HUGS ~ BRIAN
November 21st, 2016 19:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh LG ~ this is such a sad poem ~ Please don\'t leave us ~ We all love you ! HUGS ~ BRIAN
November 21st, 2016 19:39
Finally. Silence
Augustus said:
Hurts when the mind races uncontrollably. Well done.
November 17th, 2016 21:29
Augustus said:
Hurts when the mind races uncontrollably. Well done.
November 17th, 2016 21:29
Finally. Silence
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. I like though the fact you weren\'t able to sleep, your mind was at once finally quiet. Hope you got some sleep after you wrote this!
November 17th, 2016 14:24
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. I like though the fact you weren\'t able to sleep, your mind was at once finally quiet. Hope you got some sleep after you wrote this!
November 17th, 2016 14:24
Finally. Silence
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I think everyone can relate to nights like this...very well written ..captures what its like to not be able to sleep very cleverly
November 17th, 2016 05:47
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I think everyone can relate to nights like this...very well written ..captures what its like to not be able to sleep very cleverly
November 17th, 2016 05:47
Confusion
Christina8 said:
Thank you for sharing, sometimes these help others. Great piece!
November 14th, 2016 15:20
Christina8 said:
Thank you for sharing, sometimes these help others. Great piece!
November 14th, 2016 15:20
Confusion
ron parrish aka wordman said:
life is full of choices,we can`t always chose the right path,but when we see it`s wrong we must have the courage to change...
November 13th, 2016 22:50
ron parrish aka wordman said:
life is full of choices,we can`t always chose the right path,but when we see it`s wrong we must have the courage to change...
November 13th, 2016 22:50
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