Comments received on poems by EmmaR1
Light, Angels, & Wings
Oneyedtoad said:
This is great work Emma, it reads naturally and also relays your message in a musical way. Very well written.
November 10th, 2016 23:04
Oneyedtoad said:
This is great work Emma, it reads naturally and also relays your message in a musical way. Very well written.
November 10th, 2016 23:04
WALLS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME EMMA ~ Thanks for your first poem it is an epic ! Your poem has tremendous rhythm (I did read it all) which befits the subject. Life is a matter of ups and downs and ins and outs ~ who we are and how people perceive us. We have to build WALLS to keep ourselves in and to keep out undesirable issues. I love the positivism in the final five lines ! And as life goes on ~ And pushes me hard ~ I will jump in the fire ~ And fight ~ My wings growing larger all the while ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN.
November 8th, 2016 17:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME EMMA ~ Thanks for your first poem it is an epic ! Your poem has tremendous rhythm (I did read it all) which befits the subject. Life is a matter of ups and downs and ins and outs ~ who we are and how people perceive us. We have to build WALLS to keep ourselves in and to keep out undesirable issues. I love the positivism in the final five lines ! And as life goes on ~ And pushes me hard ~ I will jump in the fire ~ And fight ~ My wings growing larger all the while ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN.
November 8th, 2016 17:25
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