Comments received on poems by tshi-tshi
awake......
Cheeky Missy said:
Horrendous. You've depicted it rather too graphically....it is awful. I am exceedingly sorry if it is for real. Your ending it in a couplet is very well done. What a veritable nightmare you've drawn! You wrote it very well.
February 6th, 2011 21:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Horrendous. You've depicted it rather too graphically....it is awful. I am exceedingly sorry if it is for real. Your ending it in a couplet is very well done. What a veritable nightmare you've drawn! You wrote it very well.
February 6th, 2011 21:24
never ending nightmare
Cheeky Missy said:
Reminds me of how I really felt when my dreams were dashed in my face.....you described it VERY well. Excellent depiction. But what do you mean about being a different character by this poem?
February 4th, 2011 14:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Reminds me of how I really felt when my dreams were dashed in my face.....you described it VERY well. Excellent depiction. But what do you mean about being a different character by this poem?
February 4th, 2011 14:20
never ending nightmare
Emi said:
Awww I know that feeling.... :( Good job. :)
February 4th, 2011 12:36
Emi said:
Awww I know that feeling.... :( Good job. :)
February 4th, 2011 12:36
