Comments received on poems by marlöw
falling
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Marlow. That quicksand is always there in life but it can be avoided as I seem to have done as I reach the twilight of my life. That quicksand is normally put in your way by others, avoid it and go your own way, it is your life so go through it in your way. Welcome to MPS.
December 20th, 2017 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Marlow. That quicksand is always there in life but it can be avoided as I seem to have done as I reach the twilight of my life. That quicksand is normally put in your way by others, avoid it and go your own way, it is your life so go through it in your way. Welcome to MPS.
December 20th, 2017 02:08
falling
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WECOME MARLOW ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ very terminal ! I was sinking in QS once but fortunately I was pulled out ! What irked me most was that my new green Wellington Boots disappeared from view ! It made me realise that LIFE is a bit like QS ! It sucks us into its grip and tries to squeeze us into its mould ! Your Poem is an allegory of those who allow themselves to get sucked into the Social QS of 21st Century Society ~ Drugs ~ Alcohol ~ Debt ~ Pornography etc ! My advice ~ to the Young Adults I Teach (17 ~ 25) is to avoid these things as you would avoid QUICKSAND ! Thanks for sharing ~ it made me think ! More please ~ YOURS BRIAN (UK)
December 19th, 2017 13:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WECOME MARLOW ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ very terminal ! I was sinking in QS once but fortunately I was pulled out ! What irked me most was that my new green Wellington Boots disappeared from view ! It made me realise that LIFE is a bit like QS ! It sucks us into its grip and tries to squeeze us into its mould ! Your Poem is an allegory of those who allow themselves to get sucked into the Social QS of 21st Century Society ~ Drugs ~ Alcohol ~ Debt ~ Pornography etc ! My advice ~ to the Young Adults I Teach (17 ~ 25) is to avoid these things as you would avoid QUICKSAND ! Thanks for sharing ~ it made me think ! More please ~ YOURS BRIAN (UK)
December 19th, 2017 13:09
