Comments received on poems by myinnervoice
Thursday...
Augustus said:
I cannot force myself to throw even a bit of gum wrapper on the side of the road but so many do just that and more. And of course you are alluding to the bigger picture of what is done to our oceans and air. Does New York City still barge its trash out to the ocean to dump? Great write. Well penned.
March 2nd, 2017 13:53
Augustus said:
I cannot force myself to throw even a bit of gum wrapper on the side of the road but so many do just that and more. And of course you are alluding to the bigger picture of what is done to our oceans and air. Does New York City still barge its trash out to the ocean to dump? Great write. Well penned.
March 2nd, 2017 13:53
Thursday...
myinnervoice said:
thanks:) Honestly...my generation at least...I\'ve met a lot of people who know and want things to change but feel like their is no way to save the world from big business destroying it lol
March 2nd, 2017 12:46
myinnervoice said:
thanks:) Honestly...my generation at least...I\'ve met a lot of people who know and want things to change but feel like their is no way to save the world from big business destroying it lol
March 2nd, 2017 12:46
Thursday...
WriteBeLight said:
I agree. The world is getting more polluted and troubled. People have to stop and think. But, they need to look up from their phones first. Great job on this.
March 2nd, 2017 12:44
WriteBeLight said:
I agree. The world is getting more polluted and troubled. People have to stop and think. But, they need to look up from their phones first. Great job on this.
March 2nd, 2017 12:44
Somedays are harder than others.
WriteBeLight said:
I feel for the person in this poem. I think the fact that they are realizing the situation, will insight the change they need. Great job!
February 27th, 2017 19:44
WriteBeLight said:
I feel for the person in this poem. I think the fact that they are realizing the situation, will insight the change they need. Great job!
February 27th, 2017 19:44
Waking Up in the grass.
Augustus said:
Kind of like reassessing your life up to this point with so heavy decisions to be made.
February 23rd, 2017 19:02
Augustus said:
Kind of like reassessing your life up to this point with so heavy decisions to be made.
February 23rd, 2017 19:02
A Fools Prayer
myinnervoice said:
Thank you, it makes me very happy to know you liked it.
January 3rd, 2017 22:09
myinnervoice said:
Thank you, it makes me very happy to know you liked it.
January 3rd, 2017 22:09
A Fools Prayer
camille said:
Oh my goodness .. such a heartfelt and poignant write .. honest and revealing .. c xx
January 3rd, 2017 12:52
camille said:
Oh my goodness .. such a heartfelt and poignant write .. honest and revealing .. c xx
January 3rd, 2017 12:52
A Fools Prayer
WriteBeLight said:
Very true. My heart breaks! Great work my inner voice!!!
December 29th, 2016 17:36
WriteBeLight said:
Very true. My heart breaks! Great work my inner voice!!!
December 29th, 2016 17:36
Grief
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful rhyming poem full of emotion and despair. Either way, you did a great job. Thanks for sharing!
December 21st, 2016 18:47
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful rhyming poem full of emotion and despair. Either way, you did a great job. Thanks for sharing!
December 21st, 2016 18:47
Grief
WriteBeLight said:
I can feel, in your writing, the despair of the loss. Very well done!
December 21st, 2016 14:40
WriteBeLight said:
I can feel, in your writing, the despair of the loss. Very well done!
December 21st, 2016 14:40
The Impulse.
Augustus said:
The speaker is able to create like a god it seems. That is awesome. The poem has a freshness to it and is well constructed.
December 20th, 2016 19:03
Augustus said:
The speaker is able to create like a god it seems. That is awesome. The poem has a freshness to it and is well constructed.
December 20th, 2016 19:03
The Impulse.
WriteBeLight said:
I feel like I am watching an artist create something amazing!
December 20th, 2016 16:06
WriteBeLight said:
I feel like I am watching an artist create something amazing!
December 20th, 2016 16:06
Progression of Time.
Augustus said:
I see the beast as an inner demon that goes wherever we go. I like the run your hands line.
December 19th, 2016 21:13
Augustus said:
I see the beast as an inner demon that goes wherever we go. I like the run your hands line.
December 19th, 2016 21:13
Progression of Time.
WriteBeLight said:
I like the messages of being grateful, remembering memories, and pushing onward. Very nice.
December 19th, 2016 12:35
WriteBeLight said:
I like the messages of being grateful, remembering memories, and pushing onward. Very nice.
December 19th, 2016 12:35
Courting Agony
WriteBeLight said:
It is kind of like fear-based procrastination. Some people do so because they are just plain lazy. I get from your poem, that the person is not lazy, but fearful of putting who they truly are out there for all to see, even though that is what they really want. I could hear the inner voice yelling out loud. Like the poem.
December 17th, 2016 04:44
WriteBeLight said:
It is kind of like fear-based procrastination. Some people do so because they are just plain lazy. I get from your poem, that the person is not lazy, but fearful of putting who they truly are out there for all to see, even though that is what they really want. I could hear the inner voice yelling out loud. Like the poem.
December 17th, 2016 04:44
Courting Agony
Quemis said:
I find that it is one of the hardest things in life,
Keeping the \"you\" you identify as, the same \"you\" that is presented to the world.
This is why we make art, this is why we sing, dance and write. To try to put forward this thing that we cant always live as, or cant even fully explain in conversation.
I get it. Its one of the most common feelings I have. Great piece, so honest.
December 17th, 2016 04:08
Quemis said:
I find that it is one of the hardest things in life,
Keeping the \"you\" you identify as, the same \"you\" that is presented to the world.
This is why we make art, this is why we sing, dance and write. To try to put forward this thing that we cant always live as, or cant even fully explain in conversation.
I get it. Its one of the most common feelings I have. Great piece, so honest.
December 17th, 2016 04:08
Courting Agony
MisKylie said:
All we ever want is to truly be seen for who we feel we are. And to be able to portray it in a way that someone else can understand is always the struggle. Or you can just do what I do and not care what other people think lol. Beautiful write
December 17th, 2016 02:54
MisKylie said:
All we ever want is to truly be seen for who we feel we are. And to be able to portray it in a way that someone else can understand is always the struggle. Or you can just do what I do and not care what other people think lol. Beautiful write
December 17th, 2016 02:54
Courting Agony
XxRaavenSairasxX said:
I really like how this flows, and the touch of rhyming words, as well.
December 17th, 2016 02:18
XxRaavenSairasxX said:
I really like how this flows, and the touch of rhyming words, as well.
December 17th, 2016 02:18
Courting Agony
Daniel said:
I really enjoyed this and look forward to reading more.
December 17th, 2016 01:56
Daniel said:
I really enjoyed this and look forward to reading more.
December 17th, 2016 01:56
Courting Agony
Augustus said:
One way out of the struggle is to not try or sabotage your work and that is painful, but also comfortable. What if I create something and no one likes it? This is i believe a classic struggle and you describe it well.
December 17th, 2016 01:50
Augustus said:
One way out of the struggle is to not try or sabotage your work and that is painful, but also comfortable. What if I create something and no one likes it? This is i believe a classic struggle and you describe it well.
December 17th, 2016 01:50
