Comments received on poems by Tony Grannell
Storm Over Gaza
jarcher54 said:
Gut-wrenching utterance that captures so many of our thoughts-- you are a fine translator from thought to word, from heart to pen. I cannot forget this image: \"From breast an infant seared to coke\"... more than a poetic image... a brutal close-up look... sigh
August 10th, 2025 11:00
jarcher54 said:
Gut-wrenching utterance that captures so many of our thoughts-- you are a fine translator from thought to word, from heart to pen. I cannot forget this image: \"From breast an infant seared to coke\"... more than a poetic image... a brutal close-up look... sigh
August 10th, 2025 11:00
The Egyptian
Bella Shepard said:
A poem of such romantic bliss, loves journey upon the nile, in elegant verse. Dreamy and perfect!
August 10th, 2025 10:53
Bella Shepard said:
A poem of such romantic bliss, loves journey upon the nile, in elegant verse. Dreamy and perfect!
August 10th, 2025 10:53
The Egyptian
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely ode to a love. So classic a tribute to such a lover. Very nice Tony in verse and good meter as typical of your poetry.
August 10th, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely ode to a love. So classic a tribute to such a lover. Very nice Tony in verse and good meter as typical of your poetry.
August 10th, 2025 09:59
The Fall of the Raj
Friendship said:
This poem magnificently explores themes of class, privilege, and the beautiful intersection of social hierarchies, particularly in the vibrant context of colonial India. The speaker, as the president of a cricket club, radiates a sense of aristocratic charm as he savors a drink and connects with the staff. The juxtaposition of his playful, yet endearing, attitude toward the serving boy with his profound affection for his beloved highlights the inspiring complexities of social dynamics. The poem also hints at the broader social transformations of the time, particularly with the concluding line referencing Gandhi, suggesting an impending yet empowering challenge to the status quo.
August 9th, 2025 16:09
Friendship said:
This poem magnificently explores themes of class, privilege, and the beautiful intersection of social hierarchies, particularly in the vibrant context of colonial India. The speaker, as the president of a cricket club, radiates a sense of aristocratic charm as he savors a drink and connects with the staff. The juxtaposition of his playful, yet endearing, attitude toward the serving boy with his profound affection for his beloved highlights the inspiring complexities of social dynamics. The poem also hints at the broader social transformations of the time, particularly with the concluding line referencing Gandhi, suggesting an impending yet empowering challenge to the status quo.
August 9th, 2025 16:09
The Fall of the Raj
Doggerel Dave said:
Such witness accounts enrich our understanding of History\'s inevitable march. The very moment when the Sun began to set on the British Empire documented in loving detail.
August 8th, 2025 23:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Such witness accounts enrich our understanding of History\'s inevitable march. The very moment when the Sun began to set on the British Empire documented in loving detail.
August 8th, 2025 23:40
The Fall of the Raj
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tony, the timing and dry wit of this is perfect. It reads like a well-polished stage piece…each beat building to that final wink. The class satire and absurdity are totes what make this a fave, my friend. Thoroughly enjoyed the ride. Hope all has been well in my absence. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 19:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tony, the timing and dry wit of this is perfect. It reads like a well-polished stage piece…each beat building to that final wink. The class satire and absurdity are totes what make this a fave, my friend. Thoroughly enjoyed the ride. Hope all has been well in my absence. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 19:58
The Fall of the Raj
sorenbarrett said:
The buildup was perfect and the timing well done. It was indeed a fun read with a lesson as well. Well done Tony
August 8th, 2025 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
The buildup was perfect and the timing well done. It was indeed a fun read with a lesson as well. Well done Tony
August 8th, 2025 11:45
Storm Over Gaza
Poetic Licence said:
I have written many times about this devastating situation but not as eloquently and beautifully as this. Through history a troubled land with real hate flowing from both sides, but as usual its the innocent one side who pay the ultimate price to appease the war mongers on both sides, nicely expressed and written
August 7th, 2025 12:08
Poetic Licence said:
I have written many times about this devastating situation but not as eloquently and beautifully as this. Through history a troubled land with real hate flowing from both sides, but as usual its the innocent one side who pay the ultimate price to appease the war mongers on both sides, nicely expressed and written
August 7th, 2025 12:08
Storm Over Gaza
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message Tony set in marvelous rhyme and meter. A heartbeat yet quelled in a burnt and desolate land where revenge and reprisal are deemed more important than forgiveness and peace. Religion, land, feuds, history all prevent cooperation. A land it seems doomed to total destruction. Nicely done Tony
August 7th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message Tony set in marvelous rhyme and meter. A heartbeat yet quelled in a burnt and desolate land where revenge and reprisal are deemed more important than forgiveness and peace. Religion, land, feuds, history all prevent cooperation. A land it seems doomed to total destruction. Nicely done Tony
August 7th, 2025 04:29
No More to Sea or Sail Am I
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, the poem reflects on the complex relationship between a mariner (or sailor) and the sea, portraying it as both a nurturing and destructive force. It captures the awe, reverence, and fear that come with navigating life\'s journey, likening it to sailing through various emotional and physical experiences.
August 5th, 2025 18:06
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, the poem reflects on the complex relationship between a mariner (or sailor) and the sea, portraying it as both a nurturing and destructive force. It captures the awe, reverence, and fear that come with navigating life\'s journey, likening it to sailing through various emotional and physical experiences.
August 5th, 2025 18:06
No More to Sea or Sail Am I
peto said:
See me
See the sea
I.love the sea me
This is phenomenal writing Tony
The flow carries the reader along effortlessly
\"In cahoots with the moon she\'ll give up her dead,\"
Tremendous
August 5th, 2025 11:58
peto said:
See me
See the sea
I.love the sea me
This is phenomenal writing Tony
The flow carries the reader along effortlessly
\"In cahoots with the moon she\'ll give up her dead,\"
Tremendous
August 5th, 2025 11:58
No More to Sea or Sail Am I
Poetic Licence said:
Now this is one you can listen to Infront of the coal burning fire in a snug little pub, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 10:16
Poetic Licence said:
Now this is one you can listen to Infront of the coal burning fire in a snug little pub, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 10:16
No More to Sea or Sail Am I
2781 said:
That can be a sad day, but we all get worn out, in the end,
God blesses.
August 5th, 2025 08:51
2781 said:
That can be a sad day, but we all get worn out, in the end,
God blesses.
August 5th, 2025 08:51
No More to Sea or Sail Am I
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved tails of the sea, my favorite book Moby Dick to which this poem gives a few hidden references. Full of metaphor as well it speaks to the inner soul behind the conscious eyes and even mind. A lovely piece of work with wonderful rhyme to carry it on the winds of meter. Loved it Tony
August 5th, 2025 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved tails of the sea, my favorite book Moby Dick to which this poem gives a few hidden references. Full of metaphor as well it speaks to the inner soul behind the conscious eyes and even mind. A lovely piece of work with wonderful rhyme to carry it on the winds of meter. Loved it Tony
August 5th, 2025 07:59
The Last Farewell
peto said:
Superb read Tony
The flow is immaculate with rhyme to match
Excellent writing
August 5th, 2025 05:38
peto said:
Superb read Tony
The flow is immaculate with rhyme to match
Excellent writing
August 5th, 2025 05:38
The Last Farewell
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching parting of the ways, a sense of before death comes to one, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:13
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching parting of the ways, a sense of before death comes to one, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:13
The Last Farewell
Teddy.15 said:
Beauty in every line, my favourite stanza, but they are all simply wonderful.
’Tis eve upon the ebbing tide,
these sails will take you into night.
When come the morn, the ocean wide
will find you in some fairer light
I love everything about this poetry 🌹
August 4th, 2025 08:24
Teddy.15 said:
Beauty in every line, my favourite stanza, but they are all simply wonderful.
’Tis eve upon the ebbing tide,
these sails will take you into night.
When come the morn, the ocean wide
will find you in some fairer light
I love everything about this poetry 🌹
August 4th, 2025 08:24
The Last Farewell
Friendship said:
A very heartfelt poem, so deeply profound that it touched my heart. Your poem is about the loss of friendship, the acceptance of the passage of time, and the poet expresses both sorrow and departure, understanding that it must happen, reflecting a memory shared together. The poem revolves around the bittersweet nature of farewell and the inevitability of parting. It captures the emotional turmoil of saying goodbye to a dear friend while acknowledging that such separations are a natural part of life. This poem serves as a means for the poet to process their emotions regarding the impending separation, ultimately aiming to convey support and understanding for their friend\'s new journey while grappling with their own feelings of loss.
August 4th, 2025 06:12
Friendship said:
A very heartfelt poem, so deeply profound that it touched my heart. Your poem is about the loss of friendship, the acceptance of the passage of time, and the poet expresses both sorrow and departure, understanding that it must happen, reflecting a memory shared together. The poem revolves around the bittersweet nature of farewell and the inevitability of parting. It captures the emotional turmoil of saying goodbye to a dear friend while acknowledging that such separations are a natural part of life. This poem serves as a means for the poet to process their emotions regarding the impending separation, ultimately aiming to convey support and understanding for their friend\'s new journey while grappling with their own feelings of loss.
August 4th, 2025 06:12
The Last Farewell
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the all the feel of a greek mythological tragedy. I see Euripides taken to Hades calling out to Orpheus as she descends to Hades. The title evoked memories of Rodger Whittaker singing the song by the same name. A beautiful dirge sung for oneself as one is about to depart. As always set in wonderful rhyme.
August 4th, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the all the feel of a greek mythological tragedy. I see Euripides taken to Hades calling out to Orpheus as she descends to Hades. The title evoked memories of Rodger Whittaker singing the song by the same name. A beautiful dirge sung for oneself as one is about to depart. As always set in wonderful rhyme.
August 4th, 2025 05:01
We Kept Our Mouths Shut
Poetic Licence said:
Those who keep silent for of reprisals or fear of what they seen, punishment either way, retribution or lifetime of guilt, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 13:50
Poetic Licence said:
Those who keep silent for of reprisals or fear of what they seen, punishment either way, retribution or lifetime of guilt, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 13:50
We Kept Our Mouths Shut
Bella Shepard said:
Whether through fear or complacancy, we have often found it more expedient to protect ourselves with silence in the face of the opression of others. Our shame is never reconcilable. You present this dilemma quite powerfully, and we should take heed.
August 3rd, 2025 12:06
Bella Shepard said:
Whether through fear or complacancy, we have often found it more expedient to protect ourselves with silence in the face of the opression of others. Our shame is never reconcilable. You present this dilemma quite powerfully, and we should take heed.
August 3rd, 2025 12:06
We Kept Our Mouths Shut
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the theme of silence in the face of oppression and the resulting emotional turmoil. It reflects on the consequences of remaining silent to avoid suffering or conflict, as well as the impact of external forces that compel individuals to speak out. The poet seems to revolve around the tension between the desire to protect oneself and the inevitability of suffering when silence is maintained.
August 3rd, 2025 08:06
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the theme of silence in the face of oppression and the resulting emotional turmoil. It reflects on the consequences of remaining silent to avoid suffering or conflict, as well as the impact of external forces that compel individuals to speak out. The poet seems to revolve around the tension between the desire to protect oneself and the inevitability of suffering when silence is maintained.
August 3rd, 2025 08:06
We Kept Our Mouths Shut
Teddy.15 said:
Something incredibly haunting especially in your first lines, speaking of mouths yet I also see eyes. Bloomin clever. 🌹
August 3rd, 2025 05:16
Teddy.15 said:
Something incredibly haunting especially in your first lines, speaking of mouths yet I also see eyes. Bloomin clever. 🌹
August 3rd, 2025 05:16
We Kept Our Mouths Shut
sorenbarrett said:
They have a saying in Brazil that translated is (a mouth full of ants) and that is what happens when one doesn\'t keep their mouth shut, and that is how they are found. A great poem as always. Since childhood I was a Robert Service fan and his narrative style. many of your poems have a bit of that in them. Thanks so much for sharing.
August 3rd, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
They have a saying in Brazil that translated is (a mouth full of ants) and that is what happens when one doesn\'t keep their mouth shut, and that is how they are found. A great poem as always. Since childhood I was a Robert Service fan and his narrative style. many of your poems have a bit of that in them. Thanks so much for sharing.
August 3rd, 2025 04:11
A Ball of Love
Friendship said:
Well written,to me, your poem depicts a rustic life in the countryside, characterized by warmth, care, and the struggles of daily farm life during winter. It highlights the bond between the poet and their loved one, as well as their connection to nature and the animals they care for.
August 2nd, 2025 07:05
Friendship said:
Well written,to me, your poem depicts a rustic life in the countryside, characterized by warmth, care, and the struggles of daily farm life during winter. It highlights the bond between the poet and their loved one, as well as their connection to nature and the animals they care for.
August 2nd, 2025 07:05
A Ball of Love
Poetic Licence said:
A very warm and loving write, two people who have worked, lived and struggled together through all weathers and seasons. Each contributing in their own way to the ball of love, knowing they can depend and rely on each other to always be there, and we must not forget the dog, wonderfully enjoyable read
August 2nd, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
A very warm and loving write, two people who have worked, lived and struggled together through all weathers and seasons. Each contributing in their own way to the ball of love, knowing they can depend and rely on each other to always be there, and we must not forget the dog, wonderfully enjoyable read
August 2nd, 2025 06:13
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