Comments received on poems by Phoenix8523
Demon Speak
Daniel said:
It is so hard sometimes to see beyond the darkness, a beautiful poem!
January 8th, 2017 20:14
Daniel said:
It is so hard sometimes to see beyond the darkness, a beautiful poem!
January 8th, 2017 20:14
Demon Speak
willyweed said:
willy sits at the river bank as the water and words flow gentle over the slick rock; thinking what a beautiful thing the human mind!
and shouts brilliant P
January 8th, 2017 17:12
willyweed said:
willy sits at the river bank as the water and words flow gentle over the slick rock; thinking what a beautiful thing the human mind!
and shouts brilliant P
January 8th, 2017 17:12
Demon Speak
Augustus said:
This is a good description of what either excessive doubt or hallucinations can do to a person. Well done.
January 8th, 2017 15:34
Augustus said:
This is a good description of what either excessive doubt or hallucinations can do to a person. Well done.
January 8th, 2017 15:34
Demon Speak
Francesco said:
I really enjoyed this. Demons can be very difficult to handle, but with compassion and comprehension they can be often be turned from foe to friend.
Well done, a lovely poem!
January 8th, 2017 13:53
Francesco said:
I really enjoyed this. Demons can be very difficult to handle, but with compassion and comprehension they can be often be turned from foe to friend.
Well done, a lovely poem!
January 8th, 2017 13:53
Demon Speak
Projectbeing said:
Cause in reality they have not said a word, that line got me thinking, deep. Like it
January 8th, 2017 13:31
Projectbeing said:
Cause in reality they have not said a word, that line got me thinking, deep. Like it
January 8th, 2017 13:31
What Could Have Been
P.H.Rose said:
Another very
Good piece
You have talent
Lady....well done!!
January 8th, 2017 10:00
P.H.Rose said:
Another very
Good piece
You have talent
Lady....well done!!
January 8th, 2017 10:00
Legacy
P.H.Rose said:
I love this.its so
Good....well done!!
You can feel your
Anger and passion
in every word ...
Brilliant...
January 8th, 2017 09:56
P.H.Rose said:
I love this.its so
Good....well done!!
You can feel your
Anger and passion
in every word ...
Brilliant...
January 8th, 2017 09:56
Legacy
willyweed said:
you are there. standing with a masterpiece! BRAVO young lady!
January 7th, 2017 12:16
willyweed said:
you are there. standing with a masterpiece! BRAVO young lady!
January 7th, 2017 12:16
LEMMINGS/I Stand Alone
Augustus said:
A toast to being yourself. Nicely done.
January 6th, 2017 21:31
Augustus said:
A toast to being yourself. Nicely done.
January 6th, 2017 21:31
LEMMINGS/I Stand Alone
willyweed said:
this is great all around Phoenix
opening couplet is killer.your smoking little girl. great work. ww
January 6th, 2017 14:29
willyweed said:
this is great all around Phoenix
opening couplet is killer.your smoking little girl. great work. ww
January 6th, 2017 14:29
Absence of Lux
WriteBeLight said:
I agree with the above comments and feel you did a supurb job in the message!
January 6th, 2017 13:53
WriteBeLight said:
I agree with the above comments and feel you did a supurb job in the message!
January 6th, 2017 13:53
LEMMINGS/I Stand Alone
WriteBeLight said:
Very excellent ending and poem overall! Liked the style a lot!
January 6th, 2017 13:50
WriteBeLight said:
Very excellent ending and poem overall! Liked the style a lot!
January 6th, 2017 13:50
LEMMINGS/I Stand Alone
rrodriguez said:
Be free of inhibitions and write because you\'re be to do so... excellent!
January 6th, 2017 13:45
rrodriguez said:
Be free of inhibitions and write because you\'re be to do so... excellent!
January 6th, 2017 13:45
Hurts
Francesco said:
Wonderful! Love the structure and the short phrases.
It keeps you on your toes and catches you off guard at the same time.
Thank you for sharing.
January 6th, 2017 06:20
Francesco said:
Wonderful! Love the structure and the short phrases.
It keeps you on your toes and catches you off guard at the same time.
Thank you for sharing.
January 6th, 2017 06:20
What Could Have Been
willyweed said:
Oh that would have sucked!
I would not have had the opportunity to read your awesome work. very nice. ww
January 5th, 2017 15:02
willyweed said:
Oh that would have sucked!
I would not have had the opportunity to read your awesome work. very nice. ww
January 5th, 2017 15:02
What Could Have Been
Phoenix8523 said:
Definitely, thanks for your comment! -- phoenix
January 5th, 2017 14:34
Phoenix8523 said:
Definitely, thanks for your comment! -- phoenix
January 5th, 2017 14:34
What Could Have Been
Augustus said:
I often wonder about those kinds of things. If everything on earth destroyed today and left with a few hundred - thousand people, how long would it take before man made a simple metal ax? Enjoyed. And yes, women play a huge role in discovery.
January 5th, 2017 14:30
Augustus said:
I often wonder about those kinds of things. If everything on earth destroyed today and left with a few hundred - thousand people, how long would it take before man made a simple metal ax? Enjoyed. And yes, women play a huge role in discovery.
January 5th, 2017 14:30
Hurts
rrodriguez said:
Very reflective... and insightful in its realism. Pain is a catalyst to many emotions. Well written friend... healing can be gain through writing and sharing.
January 5th, 2017 09:47
rrodriguez said:
Very reflective... and insightful in its realism. Pain is a catalyst to many emotions. Well written friend... healing can be gain through writing and sharing.
January 5th, 2017 09:47
Absence of Lux
Augustus said:
This is so cool. At first I read it as an abused wife. Then I realized who was the shadow. Very clever and well written.
January 4th, 2017 21:58
Augustus said:
This is so cool. At first I read it as an abused wife. Then I realized who was the shadow. Very clever and well written.
January 4th, 2017 21:58
Absence of Lux
willyweed said:
another brilliant write
maybe I\'m amazed !
dripping in talent. great work! ww
January 4th, 2017 20:32
willyweed said:
another brilliant write
maybe I\'m amazed !
dripping in talent. great work! ww
January 4th, 2017 20:32
Hurts
Daisyblue said:
This touched me deeper than anything I\'ve read lately. It\'s so honest. Thank you for the feelings.
January 2nd, 2017 23:48
Daisyblue said:
This touched me deeper than anything I\'ve read lately. It\'s so honest. Thank you for the feelings.
January 2nd, 2017 23:48
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