Comments received on poems by Phoenix8523



Struggling at the Crossroads
rrodriguez said:

Great job.. reminds me of Robert Frost\'s The Road not Taken...


January 13th, 2017 13:33

Struggling at the Crossroads
willyweed said:

I am falling for the writer in you. ww

January 13th, 2017 13:08

What Could Have Been
Fay Slimm. said:

I love all these refreshing \"what ifs\" - thinking at life slanty-eyed is what poets do best and this is certainly no exception - a read to set us all thinking. Liked and enjoyed.

January 13th, 2017 13:03

Struggling at the Crossroads
Fay Slimm. said:

A read filled with anguish of choice which crossroads image so well yet ending on positive notes the verse leaves readers with lighter hearts. A powerful and well-crafted piece of work .

January 13th, 2017 12:40

Struggling at the Crossroads
WriteBeLight said:

Excellent one Phoenix. I love the Angel in the story. :)

January 13th, 2017 12:37

Struggling at the Crossroads
berdnt_victoria said:

This is a really good poem! Great job! ~ Victoria ~

January 13th, 2017 12:12

Finally
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 12th, 2017 16:40

Finally
Christina8 said:

Great poem! Remember bullies are weak but you are strong and courageous! I also agree with Kat. Great job!-Christina

January 12th, 2017 15:25

Finally
P.H.Rose said:

Had my fill of bullies
Through 5 decades
Good poem
Well done

January 12th, 2017 14:03

Finally
WriteBeLight said:

We can look at ourselves in the harshest way and not see how great we are. Nice job. :) But, be in the game under your conditions. Bullies and people who label are weak. And, you are strong!

January 12th, 2017 12:48

Finally
Daniel said:

Another wonderful poem Phoenix!

January 12th, 2017 12:42

Finally
willyweed said:

My heads off to you. Nice one
+what kat said all true

January 12th, 2017 12:20

My Favorite Grandpa Tale
willyweed said:

Old grandpa is my kind of guy!
good & funny. ww

January 11th, 2017 19:30

My Favorite Grandpa Tale
WriteBeLight said:

Excellent!

January 11th, 2017 13:08

My Favorite Grandpa Tale
Tony36 said:

Love it great write

January 11th, 2017 08:36

My Favorite Grandpa Tale
Michael Edwards said:

Think he\'s a bit like me - my family think I\'m a tad eccentric - love the ditty Phoenix

January 11th, 2017 04:47

Future Memories
notapoet said:

Great work here Phoenix, enjoyed it very much!

January 10th, 2017 19:17

Future Memories
Michael Edwards said:

Now this is just great - the whole rhythm and the way it all flows - super piece of writing.

January 10th, 2017 15:45

Future Memories
mrandrewtheguy said:

In the original mythology pandora actually has a jar, not a box. But besides that, it\'s good.

January 10th, 2017 14:35

Future Memories
Christina8 said:

Some memories are meant to stay hidden. Hope they do. Great poem!

January 10th, 2017 13:08

Future Memories
willyweed said:

You are all write. nice! ww

January 10th, 2017 11:29

Future Memories
Daniel said:

Some memories should never see the light of day! Brilliant write!

January 10th, 2017 11:26

Future Memories
Dford1 said:

I agree, it is very poignant. Stay well!

January 10th, 2017 11:05

Future Memories
KJ said:

This is very good!

January 10th, 2017 10:41

Future Memories
WriteBeLight said:

Excellent and very poignant!

January 10th, 2017 09:35

Paradox/Holon
Daniel said:

A great rebellious piece, brilliantly written!

January 9th, 2017 15:44

Paradox/Holon
HarveyDent said:

Nice write. I dig the sincerity, and the big ideas you express about what it means to genuinely be yourself.

January 9th, 2017 15:38

Paradox/Holon
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 9th, 2017 13:51

Paradox/Holon
willyweed said:

Brill and clever just as ever
Willy loves your work.ww

January 9th, 2017 10:39

Paradox/Holon
Phoenix8523 said:

Thank you, Kat -- phoenix

January 9th, 2017 08:37

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