Comments received on poems by Phoenix8523



Legion
elchupacabra said:

i really like the cadence of this poetry, its a dark message, but well-written

April 11th, 2017 19:15

meaningless
WriteBeLight said:

You belong with the great poets!

March 15th, 2017 17:52

meaningless
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

March 15th, 2017 13:37

First Annual
notapoet said:

WOW! I really don\'t have the words to express how this moved me but I think Damaged Souls comment sums it up. Just an amazing write, my heart goes out to you my friend.

January 25th, 2017 17:44

First Annual
WriteBeLight said:

I feel he hears you only because that is what I truly believe as it relates to me. I am sorry for your loss. Beautiful and heartfelt poem to a poignant anniversary.

January 25th, 2017 16:44

First Annual
Fay Slimm said:

A heart-wrenching read Phoenix - - regret visits us all at times - you phrase it\'s result very clearly in these lines. Thank you for posting it.

January 25th, 2017 14:34

Legacy
Christina8 said:

Excellent rhyming poem about hypocrites. I truly don\'t know where to start, each stanza a talking point of it\'s own. But like you said basically, you know you\'re not perfect but these people will have to \"lie in the bed they make\". So sorry you went through this. Thank you for sharing

January 18th, 2017 17:29

Legacy
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

Awesome. Loved it!

January 18th, 2017 15:25

Legacy
Augustus said:

great rant.

January 18th, 2017 13:30

Legacy
WriteBeLight said:

Great poem about hypocrite\'s. Yes, the Church can be filled with sinners, who feel that every Sunday they can ask for forgiveness so they can continue their sins. Nobody\'s perfect, but you can try hard to behave correctly. Nice job on this.

January 18th, 2017 06:42

Butt Nugget
Augustus said:

Love it. Gathering your strength and realizing you are whole. Kudos.

January 17th, 2017 16:17

Butt Nugget
Tony36 said:

Love it

January 17th, 2017 14:08

Butt Nugget
Christina8 said:

Great poem! And great ending too!-Christina

January 17th, 2017 12:17

Butt Nugget
My_Brain said:

Great poem! I have been in this situation before, unfortunately I know it to well. The ending is perfect! ~Bella

January 17th, 2017 10:53

Butt Nugget
WriteBeLight said:

Ha Ha. Like the ending!

January 17th, 2017 10:36

Ascent into Madness
Augustus said:

That\'s believing in yourself. Inspiring.

January 15th, 2017 19:04

Ascent into Madness
willyweed said:

We heard all the way up here at the evergreen ranch all the way out here
on the western astral planes
heli\'s fir\' it wer good. you did that write. ww

January 15th, 2017 16:38

Ascent into Madness
Dford1 said:

I, too, found it inspiring. Good job!

January 15th, 2017 15:58

Ascent into Madness
Tony36 said:

AWESOME poem

January 15th, 2017 11:32

Profound
My_Brain said:

This is a very short but mighty poem. Great read! ~ Bella

January 14th, 2017 21:28

Profound
Augustus said:

Perhaps one day you\'ll jump out and surprise the world. Nicely done.

January 14th, 2017 19:20

Profound
Michael Edwards said:

\'Tis indeed profound and a darn good read at that.a

January 14th, 2017 14:59

Profound
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 14th, 2017 10:40

Profound
WriteBeLight said:

I can relate. Very well put.

January 14th, 2017 10:11

Struggling at the Crossroads
elsiewarrenswords said:

Amazing write!!

January 14th, 2017 04:48

Finally
Terry dailey said:

Tallented as i rxpected great write.

January 14th, 2017 02:42

What Could Have Been
Terry dailey said:

Very insightfull

January 14th, 2017 02:40

Struggling at the Crossroads
Michael Edwards said:

Superbly crafted Phoenix

January 13th, 2017 15:15

Struggling at the Crossroads
Christina8 said:

Great poem! I love that the angel takes you by the hand in second to last stanza. I\'m rooting for the angel!-Christina

January 13th, 2017 14:56

Struggling at the Crossroads
Tony36 said:

Amazingly awesome write

January 13th, 2017 14:30

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