Comments received on poems by Phoenix8523
Legion
elchupacabra said:
i really like the cadence of this poetry, its a dark message, but well-written
April 11th, 2017 19:15
elchupacabra said:
i really like the cadence of this poetry, its a dark message, but well-written
April 11th, 2017 19:15
First Annual
notapoet said:
WOW! I really don\'t have the words to express how this moved me but I think Damaged Souls comment sums it up. Just an amazing write, my heart goes out to you my friend.
January 25th, 2017 17:44
notapoet said:
WOW! I really don\'t have the words to express how this moved me but I think Damaged Souls comment sums it up. Just an amazing write, my heart goes out to you my friend.
January 25th, 2017 17:44
First Annual
WriteBeLight said:
I feel he hears you only because that is what I truly believe as it relates to me. I am sorry for your loss. Beautiful and heartfelt poem to a poignant anniversary.
January 25th, 2017 16:44
WriteBeLight said:
I feel he hears you only because that is what I truly believe as it relates to me. I am sorry for your loss. Beautiful and heartfelt poem to a poignant anniversary.
January 25th, 2017 16:44
First Annual
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-wrenching read Phoenix - - regret visits us all at times - you phrase it\'s result very clearly in these lines. Thank you for posting it.
January 25th, 2017 14:34
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-wrenching read Phoenix - - regret visits us all at times - you phrase it\'s result very clearly in these lines. Thank you for posting it.
January 25th, 2017 14:34
Legacy
Christina8 said:
Excellent rhyming poem about hypocrites. I truly don\'t know where to start, each stanza a talking point of it\'s own. But like you said basically, you know you\'re not perfect but these people will have to \"lie in the bed they make\". So sorry you went through this. Thank you for sharing
January 18th, 2017 17:29
Christina8 said:
Excellent rhyming poem about hypocrites. I truly don\'t know where to start, each stanza a talking point of it\'s own. But like you said basically, you know you\'re not perfect but these people will have to \"lie in the bed they make\". So sorry you went through this. Thank you for sharing
January 18th, 2017 17:29
Legacy
WriteBeLight said:
Great poem about hypocrite\'s. Yes, the Church can be filled with sinners, who feel that every Sunday they can ask for forgiveness so they can continue their sins. Nobody\'s perfect, but you can try hard to behave correctly. Nice job on this.
January 18th, 2017 06:42
WriteBeLight said:
Great poem about hypocrite\'s. Yes, the Church can be filled with sinners, who feel that every Sunday they can ask for forgiveness so they can continue their sins. Nobody\'s perfect, but you can try hard to behave correctly. Nice job on this.
January 18th, 2017 06:42
Butt Nugget
Augustus said:
Love it. Gathering your strength and realizing you are whole. Kudos.
January 17th, 2017 16:17
Augustus said:
Love it. Gathering your strength and realizing you are whole. Kudos.
January 17th, 2017 16:17
Butt Nugget
My_Brain said:
Great poem! I have been in this situation before, unfortunately I know it to well. The ending is perfect! ~Bella
January 17th, 2017 10:53
My_Brain said:
Great poem! I have been in this situation before, unfortunately I know it to well. The ending is perfect! ~Bella
January 17th, 2017 10:53
Ascent into Madness
Augustus said:
That\'s believing in yourself. Inspiring.
January 15th, 2017 19:04
Augustus said:
That\'s believing in yourself. Inspiring.
January 15th, 2017 19:04
Ascent into Madness
willyweed said:
We heard all the way up here at the evergreen ranch all the way out here
on the western astral planes
heli\'s fir\' it wer good. you did that write. ww
January 15th, 2017 16:38
willyweed said:
We heard all the way up here at the evergreen ranch all the way out here
on the western astral planes
heli\'s fir\' it wer good. you did that write. ww
January 15th, 2017 16:38
Profound
My_Brain said:
This is a very short but mighty poem. Great read! ~ Bella
January 14th, 2017 21:28
My_Brain said:
This is a very short but mighty poem. Great read! ~ Bella
January 14th, 2017 21:28
Profound
Augustus said:
Perhaps one day you\'ll jump out and surprise the world. Nicely done.
January 14th, 2017 19:20
Augustus said:
Perhaps one day you\'ll jump out and surprise the world. Nicely done.
January 14th, 2017 19:20
Profound
Michael Edwards said:
\'Tis indeed profound and a darn good read at that.a
January 14th, 2017 14:59
Michael Edwards said:
\'Tis indeed profound and a darn good read at that.a
January 14th, 2017 14:59
Struggling at the Crossroads
Christina8 said:
Great poem! I love that the angel takes you by the hand in second to last stanza. I\'m rooting for the angel!-Christina
January 13th, 2017 14:56
Christina8 said:
Great poem! I love that the angel takes you by the hand in second to last stanza. I\'m rooting for the angel!-Christina
January 13th, 2017 14:56
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