Comments received on poems by Lana D



Love? Love?
Sanka said:

It will definitely be more than a four letter word when you feel the love and fall and loss yourself in love ,and it will hit even harder when you love someone without them knowing,I think it\'s the most beautiful yet painful feeling in the entire world .

January 25th, 2023 10:50

Who am I to you?
Saz said:

Wonderful

May 21st, 2017 20:44

Love? Love?
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Yes it Certainly means many things,,,,but The emotions trick us into believing everything we are told...when its real, you can feel it invigorate your entire being....a tingling all the way through the body and the soul

March 18th, 2017 22:44

Who will love the little girl?
P.H.Rose said:

I love this...
Just so bloody
Good.....

February 18th, 2017 18:58

Who will love the little girl?
Laydii said:

Agreed ! It\'s beautiful 😲

February 18th, 2017 05:01

Who will love the little girl?
kayleechrbby22 said:

This is beautiful.

February 18th, 2017 02:22

Falling
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I like how it grew just like life? a mature ending great write

January 16th, 2017 17:16

Falling
Terry dailey said:

Interesting write a lifes struggle to stand seen. Pointless to run to nowhere yet takeing a step in the right direction i at tje same time many will relate.its what we do every day as humams in love. The words have feeling great write indeed.

January 15th, 2017 02:53

Falling
Terry dailey said:

Interesting write a lifes struggle to stamd seen. Pointless to run to nowhere yet takeing a step in the right direction is what we do ebery day. The words jave feeling great write indeed.

January 15th, 2017 02:49

I Am
HarveyDent said:

You seem to be very insightful, which makes you more susceptible to these negative thought loops. You\'ll make it through. The sun will shine again. It always has

January 11th, 2017 22:15

I Am
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME LANA ~ Thanks for your first poem. Very well written but with a distressing content which made me sad for you. You have com to the right site ~ BECAUSE ~ not only are we all very empathetic and supportive ~ BUT ~ many Members also confess to being DISTRESSED or PETRIFIED an some both. MY favourite line is: I TRY TO STAY POSITIVE & NOT GIVE ~ AMEN ! Power of positive thinking is the beginning of growing out of PAIN. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

January 11th, 2017 18:54

I Am
Christina8 said:

Welcome to MPS. I hope you find writing to be cathartic, we are a very supportive community. Great first poem. Hope to see more soon! (And I hope you\'ll feel better soon!)

January 11th, 2017 18:11