Comments received on poems by SunSearcher
Pharmacy Blues
WriteBeLight said:
Very well written and excellent job rhyming with such technical words. The reality of your well-written poem is so true. 90 percent of the people I work with are on some kind of anxiety or attention-deficit drugs. I, fortunately, am not one who needs that kind of \"support.\" I think people today, do somewhat talk themselves into needing medications because they are as you say so well in your poem, too lazy otherwise. And, doctors do want to throw pills at patients today. Great subject matter you have tackled here!
January 8th, 2017 07:49
WriteBeLight said:
Very well written and excellent job rhyming with such technical words. The reality of your well-written poem is so true. 90 percent of the people I work with are on some kind of anxiety or attention-deficit drugs. I, fortunately, am not one who needs that kind of \"support.\" I think people today, do somewhat talk themselves into needing medications because they are as you say so well in your poem, too lazy otherwise. And, doctors do want to throw pills at patients today. Great subject matter you have tackled here!
January 8th, 2017 07:49
Pharmacy Blues
Augustus said:
I always felt bad for pharmacists as they had such a confined space. I believe it is easier for docs to hand over unnecessary antibiotics and pain killers than argue with the client. Perhaps they feel he will just go some where else to get it. Very well done.
January 7th, 2017 21:25
Augustus said:
I always felt bad for pharmacists as they had such a confined space. I believe it is easier for docs to hand over unnecessary antibiotics and pain killers than argue with the client. Perhaps they feel he will just go some where else to get it. Very well done.
January 7th, 2017 21:25
Pharmacy Blues
Christina8 said:
An excellent poem full of truth. I worked with drs and now stay at home with kids. Bravo!! This deserves a blue ribbon!
January 7th, 2017 16:42
Christina8 said:
An excellent poem full of truth. I worked with drs and now stay at home with kids. Bravo!! This deserves a blue ribbon!
January 7th, 2017 16:42
Pharmacy Blues
willyweed said:
All going well at corporate headquarter double high profit\'s being reported. very well done!
January 7th, 2017 13:25
willyweed said:
All going well at corporate headquarter double high profit\'s being reported. very well done!
January 7th, 2017 13:25
Pharmacy Blues
Phoenix8523 said:
Wonderful flow! I appreciate your clarifying comment. Even when one really needs help with a condition, the legal prescriptions can have such incredibly bad side effects. Damned if you do, damned if you don\'t. -- phoenix
January 7th, 2017 12:16
Phoenix8523 said:
Wonderful flow! I appreciate your clarifying comment. Even when one really needs help with a condition, the legal prescriptions can have such incredibly bad side effects. Damned if you do, damned if you don\'t. -- phoenix
January 7th, 2017 12:16
Winter
Augustus said:
I love the way you had winter take on human characteristics. We feel the same in a cold relationship. Nicely done.
January 6th, 2017 21:52
Augustus said:
I love the way you had winter take on human characteristics. We feel the same in a cold relationship. Nicely done.
January 6th, 2017 21:52
Winter
Christina8 said:
Great poem. Winter is hard here too. I can relate. Wishing for sunny days!
January 6th, 2017 14:55
Christina8 said:
Great poem. Winter is hard here too. I can relate. Wishing for sunny days!
January 6th, 2017 14:55
Winter
WriteBeLight said:
Winter can be tough. And, like you, I worship the Sunny Weather, on the outside and in the inside. Great poem.
January 6th, 2017 12:35
WriteBeLight said:
Winter can be tough. And, like you, I worship the Sunny Weather, on the outside and in the inside. Great poem.
January 6th, 2017 12:35
First
SunSearcher said:
Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments. I may one day add to this one. Sometimes it just pours out for a few minutes. Funny how life molds you without you even knowing.
January 5th, 2017 11:16
SunSearcher said:
Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments. I may one day add to this one. Sometimes it just pours out for a few minutes. Funny how life molds you without you even knowing.
January 5th, 2017 11:16
First
WriteBeLight said:
Smells, food, music and more can spark memories! Very scent-sative poem! Beautiful.
January 5th, 2017 10:39
WriteBeLight said:
Smells, food, music and more can spark memories! Very scent-sative poem! Beautiful.
January 5th, 2017 10:39
First
Christina8 said:
Poem very well done. Has a twist to it. Enjoyed reading!
January 5th, 2017 09:23
Christina8 said:
Poem very well done. Has a twist to it. Enjoyed reading!
January 5th, 2017 09:23
First
willyweed said:
this does have a certain something to it, nicely done. ww
January 5th, 2017 09:15
willyweed said:
this does have a certain something to it, nicely done. ww
January 5th, 2017 09:15
First
rrodriguez said:
I read and it has subtle twist to it. It leads one way and surprise you at the end.
January 5th, 2017 08:54
rrodriguez said:
I read and it has subtle twist to it. It leads one way and surprise you at the end.
January 5th, 2017 08:54
A Mothers Mind
johannarayne81 said:
This is beautiful. Heartbreaking and honest.
~Johanna
January 4th, 2017 14:36
johannarayne81 said:
This is beautiful. Heartbreaking and honest.
~Johanna
January 4th, 2017 14:36
A Mothers Mind
willyweed said:
sounds like you have teenage heartburn. It will pass if you love them and they know it, you\'ll be fine and so will they! Good luck!
January 4th, 2017 10:43
willyweed said:
sounds like you have teenage heartburn. It will pass if you love them and they know it, you\'ll be fine and so will they! Good luck!
January 4th, 2017 10:43
A Mothers Mind
WriteBeLight said:
Yes. You hit the nail on the head. They come back, though, and realize as parents you love and care for them forever! It is a tough, tough job! Wonderfully put! I can surely relate!
January 4th, 2017 10:37
WriteBeLight said:
Yes. You hit the nail on the head. They come back, though, and realize as parents you love and care for them forever! It is a tough, tough job! Wonderfully put! I can surely relate!
January 4th, 2017 10:37
Shore
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SS ~ Love your metaphor of the ocean for a LADY and for CHILDREN awesome. Your poem is well structured and the content very erudite. ~ Thanks for sharing. Please check my poems # Thank BRIAN (UK).
January 3rd, 2017 14:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SS ~ Love your metaphor of the ocean for a LADY and for CHILDREN awesome. Your poem is well structured and the content very erudite. ~ Thanks for sharing. Please check my poems # Thank BRIAN (UK).
January 3rd, 2017 14:45
Shore
WriteBeLight said:
Very beautiful and touching. And, the picture you chose is perfect. So glad for you and your family. It is good that you are teaching them about the ocean and the feeling of standing on the shoreline. Such a feeling of freedom and open space!
January 3rd, 2017 13:18
WriteBeLight said:
Very beautiful and touching. And, the picture you chose is perfect. So glad for you and your family. It is good that you are teaching them about the ocean and the feeling of standing on the shoreline. Such a feeling of freedom and open space!
January 3rd, 2017 13:18
Shore
SunSearcher said:
Thank you all for your encouragement. This the first one I have ever made public.
~SS
January 3rd, 2017 12:42
SunSearcher said:
Thank you all for your encouragement. This the first one I have ever made public.
~SS
January 3rd, 2017 12:42
Shore
rrodriguez said:
Not only do children grow and go away, but, like time, they all grow on us and go away. I understand this to & fro flow... I enjoyed it to the point of thinking of my grown children coming and going out of our life.
January 3rd, 2017 12:39
rrodriguez said:
Not only do children grow and go away, but, like time, they all grow on us and go away. I understand this to & fro flow... I enjoyed it to the point of thinking of my grown children coming and going out of our life.
January 3rd, 2017 12:39
Shore
willyweed said:
This is a lovely comparison poem
anyone with 3 beautiful and healthy
children is truly blessed. teach the children well! peace ww
January 3rd, 2017 11:39
willyweed said:
This is a lovely comparison poem
anyone with 3 beautiful and healthy
children is truly blessed. teach the children well! peace ww
January 3rd, 2017 11:39
Shore
Tony36 said:
Awesome write, when I lived on the East coast, I used to watch the waves all the time
January 3rd, 2017 10:16
Tony36 said:
Awesome write, when I lived on the East coast, I used to watch the waves all the time
January 3rd, 2017 10:16
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