Comments received on poems by Tom13
SOCIAL MEDIA
Phoenix8523 said:
I very much enjoyed reading this! Phrasing is so well done and it reads fast and smooth. Very fun! -- phoenix
January 4th, 2017 22:23
Phoenix8523 said:
I very much enjoyed reading this! Phrasing is so well done and it reads fast and smooth. Very fun! -- phoenix
January 4th, 2017 22:23
SOCIAL MEDIA
willyweed said:
this is good, a snapshot of our crazy
technological world. Oh simple days where have they gone! ww
January 4th, 2017 20:42
willyweed said:
this is good, a snapshot of our crazy
technological world. Oh simple days where have they gone! ww
January 4th, 2017 20:42
Rag torn hobo
WriteBeLight said:
Sad subject, but well put. The person in the poem hits the nail on the head in that his situation could be the same in an instant for us all...:)
January 4th, 2017 19:15
WriteBeLight said:
Sad subject, but well put. The person in the poem hits the nail on the head in that his situation could be the same in an instant for us all...:)
January 4th, 2017 19:15
SOCIAL MEDIA
WriteBeLight said:
Ha Ha. My head is spinning! The poem reflects so many people that I know who are addicted to social media, while they are supposed to be working, or up until all hours talking about basically nothing. Great job!
January 4th, 2017 19:12
WriteBeLight said:
Ha Ha. My head is spinning! The poem reflects so many people that I know who are addicted to social media, while they are supposed to be working, or up until all hours talking about basically nothing. Great job!
January 4th, 2017 19:12
Rag torn hobo
Tom13 said:
Hi
Rag torn hobo is my first poem have written and published using poetry blogging site. I am new to this scene, however intend this to be my first of many. All comments or criticisms are welcome and appreciated. I will try to be diverse with my poetry however I try to base the majority my poems on real life events and situations. Some poetry maybe happy and funny and some very sad and hard hitting, but I try and extract memories, experiences and accounts of real people and or situations that I have witnessed during my personal and professional life. I feel that a few words can sometimes flood the mind with positive thoughts or simply make you think twice and I like the ideas of making people think twice about situations a fast paced modern world can swallow up. Thanks for reading.
January 3rd, 2017 18:19
Tom13 said:
Hi
Rag torn hobo is my first poem have written and published using poetry blogging site. I am new to this scene, however intend this to be my first of many. All comments or criticisms are welcome and appreciated. I will try to be diverse with my poetry however I try to base the majority my poems on real life events and situations. Some poetry maybe happy and funny and some very sad and hard hitting, but I try and extract memories, experiences and accounts of real people and or situations that I have witnessed during my personal and professional life. I feel that a few words can sometimes flood the mind with positive thoughts or simply make you think twice and I like the ideas of making people think twice about situations a fast paced modern world can swallow up. Thanks for reading.
January 3rd, 2017 18:19
Rag torn hobo
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TOM ~ Thanks fro your first poem ~ Great structure (Rhyme & Rhythm) but a sad sad subject. As we grow older we all experience the UPS & DOWNS of life ~ but it makes us stronger. I worked at the YMCA with disadvantaged Young People and (as your poem suggests) it is easy to slide down the socioeconomic ladder than it is to climb back up again. Thanks for sharing and Blessings for you ~ it made me think ! Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 3rd, 2017 14:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TOM ~ Thanks fro your first poem ~ Great structure (Rhyme & Rhythm) but a sad sad subject. As we grow older we all experience the UPS & DOWNS of life ~ but it makes us stronger. I worked at the YMCA with disadvantaged Young People and (as your poem suggests) it is easy to slide down the socioeconomic ladder than it is to climb back up again. Thanks for sharing and Blessings for you ~ it made me think ! Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 3rd, 2017 14:57
Rag torn hobo
willyweed said:
wicked good rhymes in this well done work. write on ww
January 3rd, 2017 11:18
willyweed said:
wicked good rhymes in this well done work. write on ww
January 3rd, 2017 11:18
