Comments received on poems by Dford1
Castles
Augustus said:
Oh wow. The symbols and metaphors here in this jewel of a poem. Initially I was thinking of living under a communist dictator but the crumbs were little hints that this child I presume left for her family. Like most families they chose to turn away. She/he was left alone to guard the castle and the secret. The castle is her most precious possession. She dresses it daily. (Maybe I am way out in left field here, even so I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.)
January 8th, 2017 23:00
Augustus said:
Oh wow. The symbols and metaphors here in this jewel of a poem. Initially I was thinking of living under a communist dictator but the crumbs were little hints that this child I presume left for her family. Like most families they chose to turn away. She/he was left alone to guard the castle and the secret. The castle is her most precious possession. She dresses it daily. (Maybe I am way out in left field here, even so I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.)
January 8th, 2017 23:00
Castles
Phoenix8523 said:
This reads well on many levels. I relate as the wife of an abusive alcoholic. \"Keep it together and follow the script, no complaining, I\'m just the \'keeper\'\". -- phoenix
January 8th, 2017 11:29
Phoenix8523 said:
This reads well on many levels. I relate as the wife of an abusive alcoholic. \"Keep it together and follow the script, no complaining, I\'m just the \'keeper\'\". -- phoenix
January 8th, 2017 11:29
Castles
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DEE ~ We all need a purpose in life and being \"The Keeper of the Gate\" is in my experience always an honorable one. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ you have my respect ~ always. Your Caring Friend BRIAN
January 8th, 2017 10:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DEE ~ We all need a purpose in life and being \"The Keeper of the Gate\" is in my experience always an honorable one. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ you have my respect ~ always. Your Caring Friend BRIAN
January 8th, 2017 10:52
Ode to New Years
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DEE ~ A New Year does give us a real chance to forget (and forgive) the sins and errors of 2016 and begin 2017 noy only with a Clear Diary but also with a clear conscience ! My resolutions are General not to say (or post) anything I may regret ~ and to treat others as I would wish to be treated myself and always to encourage ~ never to discourage ! What are yours ? God forgives even if Humans don\'t and the SECOND CHANCE is far more important than the FINAL GLANCE ~ AMEN ! BLESSINGS for 2017 ~ Your Friend ~ BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 16:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DEE ~ A New Year does give us a real chance to forget (and forgive) the sins and errors of 2016 and begin 2017 noy only with a Clear Diary but also with a clear conscience ! My resolutions are General not to say (or post) anything I may regret ~ and to treat others as I would wish to be treated myself and always to encourage ~ never to discourage ! What are yours ? God forgives even if Humans don\'t and the SECOND CHANCE is far more important than the FINAL GLANCE ~ AMEN ! BLESSINGS for 2017 ~ Your Friend ~ BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 16:38
Ode to New Years
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DEE ~ A New Year does give us a real chance to forget (and forgive) the sins and errors of 2016 and begin 2017 noy only with a Clear Diary but also with a clear conscience ! My resolutions are General not to say (or post) anything I may regret ~ and to treat others as I would wish to be treated myself and always to encourage ~ never to discourage ! What are yours ? God forgives even if Humans don\'t and the SECOND CHANCE is far more important than the FINAL GLANCE ~ AMEN ! BLESSINGS for 2017 ~ Your Friend ~ BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 16:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DEE ~ A New Year does give us a real chance to forget (and forgive) the sins and errors of 2016 and begin 2017 noy only with a Clear Diary but also with a clear conscience ! My resolutions are General not to say (or post) anything I may regret ~ and to treat others as I would wish to be treated myself and always to encourage ~ never to discourage ! What are yours ? God forgives even if Humans don\'t and the SECOND CHANCE is far more important than the FINAL GLANCE ~ AMEN ! BLESSINGS for 2017 ~ Your Friend ~ BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 16:38
Dangerously Beautiful
rrodriguez said:
Enjoyed it a lot Well done, very poetic.
January 6th, 2017 13:52
rrodriguez said:
Enjoyed it a lot Well done, very poetic.
January 6th, 2017 13:52
Dangerously Beautiful
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEE ~ Thanks for a very elegant and beautiful first poem. I like the way you anthropomorphise the snow ! Snow is very beautiful and each snowflake a unique hexagonal star ! It also blankets a cold grey landscape in pure white ~ awesome ! You have introduced us into the \"Treasures of the Snow\" with a perfect maiden poem. Thanks for caring & sharing ! Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 04:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEE ~ Thanks for a very elegant and beautiful first poem. I like the way you anthropomorphise the snow ! Snow is very beautiful and each snowflake a unique hexagonal star ! It also blankets a cold grey landscape in pure white ~ awesome ! You have introduced us into the \"Treasures of the Snow\" with a perfect maiden poem. Thanks for caring & sharing ! Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 04:56
Dangerously Beautiful
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEE ~ Thanks for a very elegant and beautiful first poem. I like the way you anthropomorphise the snow ! Snow is very beautiful and each snowflake a unique hexagonal star ! It also blankets a cold grey landscape in pure white ~ awesome ! You have introduced us into the \"Treasures of the Snow\" with a perfect maiden poem. Thanks for caring & sharing ! Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 04:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEE ~ Thanks for a very elegant and beautiful first poem. I like the way you anthropomorphise the snow ! Snow is very beautiful and each snowflake a unique hexagonal star ! It also blankets a cold grey landscape in pure white ~ awesome ! You have introduced us into the \"Treasures of the Snow\" with a perfect maiden poem. Thanks for caring & sharing ! Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 04:56
Dangerously Beautiful
elchupacabra said:
so playful and fun! I enjoyed reading it.
January 5th, 2017 23:11
elchupacabra said:
so playful and fun! I enjoyed reading it.
January 5th, 2017 23:11
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