Comments received on poems by Bunny1996
Not The Same Anymore
Stumped said:
People are people and people change because of bad and good. For better or worse.
July 17th, 2017 22:12
Stumped said:
People are people and people change because of bad and good. For better or worse.
July 17th, 2017 22:12
Not The Same Anymore
burning-embers said:
Well, it\'s like this - i was at the supermart last week and they had a new flavour jam. Out in the parking lot i as so tempted i dipped my finger and my lips fell in love . Bunny i\'m smitten kitten, i\'ve been on the lam for my new flavour jam. Ever since that first dip, im lost of a trip. Since that first finger suck i dont give a..... Yes you\'ve got to find out why he\'s changed hun but DON\'T make a mmartyr of yourself.
July 17th, 2017 22:05
burning-embers said:
Well, it\'s like this - i was at the supermart last week and they had a new flavour jam. Out in the parking lot i as so tempted i dipped my finger and my lips fell in love . Bunny i\'m smitten kitten, i\'ve been on the lam for my new flavour jam. Ever since that first dip, im lost of a trip. Since that first finger suck i dont give a..... Yes you\'ve got to find out why he\'s changed hun but DON\'T make a mmartyr of yourself.
July 17th, 2017 22:05
Not The Same Anymore
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Sooner or later we all seem to fall short of another\'s expectations. Where do we get this ideal of \"perfection\" or \"perfect love?\" There indeed must exist a \"perfect lover\" for us to even sense that something or someone is falling short. Your poem\'s searching line \"What happen to you?\" point one to such universal truth...
July 17th, 2017 22:03
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Sooner or later we all seem to fall short of another\'s expectations. Where do we get this ideal of \"perfection\" or \"perfect love?\" There indeed must exist a \"perfect lover\" for us to even sense that something or someone is falling short. Your poem\'s searching line \"What happen to you?\" point one to such universal truth...
July 17th, 2017 22:03
You Screwed Up
burning-embers said:
If someone did that to me then they would only be worth a final short verse too. Statement well made.
July 3rd, 2017 05:55
burning-embers said:
If someone did that to me then they would only be worth a final short verse too. Statement well made.
July 3rd, 2017 05:55
Drowning
Goldfinch60 said:
Do not drown, just float on the water and your island of dreams will com to you.
July 2nd, 2017 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Do not drown, just float on the water and your island of dreams will com to you.
July 2nd, 2017 00:53
Drowning
Heather T said:
Praying for calmer waters for you. Perhaps this is a season. The great news is, seasons change. Many of us have been at that dark bottom. Keep writing.
July 1st, 2017 16:41
Heather T said:
Praying for calmer waters for you. Perhaps this is a season. The great news is, seasons change. Many of us have been at that dark bottom. Keep writing.
July 1st, 2017 16:41
Drowning
Whoami said:
I\'m familiar with those voices. The everyday struggle to just take another step is harder each day. Thank you for this. Even in strangers you can find that you\'re not alone.
July 1st, 2017 08:38
Whoami said:
I\'m familiar with those voices. The everyday struggle to just take another step is harder each day. Thank you for this. Even in strangers you can find that you\'re not alone.
July 1st, 2017 08:38
Hope and Faith
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BUNNY ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ! I like the title HOPE & FAITH that is what we all need 24/7 when we pass from our teens into our 20\'s (and in my case 30\'s !). I like the Structure of your poem and the way in which the Subject moves from Angst to Hope & Faith. You will find MPS a very empathetic and supportive site, Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 04:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BUNNY ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ! I like the title HOPE & FAITH that is what we all need 24/7 when we pass from our teens into our 20\'s (and in my case 30\'s !). I like the Structure of your poem and the way in which the Subject moves from Angst to Hope & Faith. You will find MPS a very empathetic and supportive site, Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 04:46
