Comments received on poems by Lau9hin9jack

Silent moon 🌙
willyweed said:

I with my_brain excellent !
the loudest silence I\'ve heard in awhile. ww

January 7th, 2017 22:37

Silent moon 🌙
My_Brain said:

That is an absolutely beautiful poem! Great job!

January 7th, 2017 17:30

For all the dead people

WELCOME LJ ~ Thanks for your first poem and your picture ~ both interesting ! The theme of your poem is \"the experience of death\" which you have covered in an interesting way ~ The concept of drifting into death and being carried into a new tomorrow.. Death is inevitable and it has never scared me ~ your poem helps me to visualise it ~ thank you. There is plenty of rhyme and rhythm in your poem and I found it easy to recite. More poems please ! Yours BRIAN ~ UK

January 6th, 2017 09:49

For all the dead people
Lau9hin9jack said:


January 6th, 2017 08:46