Comments received on poems by neharocks
Wind
Corey said:
From your expression I imaged myself flying carefree amidst the wind. A beautiful feeling. A very enjoyable poem!
January 22nd, 2017 09:16
Corey said:
From your expression I imaged myself flying carefree amidst the wind. A beautiful feeling. A very enjoyable poem!
January 22nd, 2017 09:16
A talk to myself
willyweed said:
Spread those wings and fly and I knew from a good source your spirit is not going anywhere for the moment
until it\'s time for it to flee it\'s captive cage when the human frame falls over so go explore.
and tell us what you find~ the writer
January 16th, 2017 15:22
willyweed said:
Spread those wings and fly and I knew from a good source your spirit is not going anywhere for the moment
until it\'s time for it to flee it\'s captive cage when the human frame falls over so go explore.
and tell us what you find~ the writer
January 16th, 2017 15:22
Wind
berdnt_victoria said:
A very nice first poem I must say! And if you think about it the wind does move in mysterious ways. I would love to read more of your poems. I hope you\'ll write more.
January 16th, 2017 10:10
berdnt_victoria said:
A very nice first poem I must say! And if you think about it the wind does move in mysterious ways. I would love to read more of your poems. I hope you\'ll write more.
January 16th, 2017 10:10
A talk to myself
My_Brain said:
Great write! I will be waiting for more of your poems!
January 14th, 2017 21:17
My_Brain said:
Great write! I will be waiting for more of your poems!
January 14th, 2017 21:17
Wind
Terry dailey said:
To feel the wind is human. To be the wind is indeed poetic my new friend. Im not sure how i can help i am not educated in poetry but will give you my imput as asked. A poet with a dictionary sitting by a peacfull creek. Has a million words to describe the peace.... A poet such as you and i without words see so much more. A bug skips avross the mirrored waters. The sounds of a vulture calling his family to feast a new found death. Many poets never blink an eye Stare only at the words. You have an advantage over thousands here. And know that a simple poem as lets say the cat in the hat. There was no cat or a hat before the eyes of the author. Yet we see the works of dr. Seuss everywhere. Hope that i helped ...your friend Terry Dailey aka HIPPY4FREE......
January 14th, 2017 03:14
Terry dailey said:
To feel the wind is human. To be the wind is indeed poetic my new friend. Im not sure how i can help i am not educated in poetry but will give you my imput as asked. A poet with a dictionary sitting by a peacfull creek. Has a million words to describe the peace.... A poet such as you and i without words see so much more. A bug skips avross the mirrored waters. The sounds of a vulture calling his family to feast a new found death. Many poets never blink an eye Stare only at the words. You have an advantage over thousands here. And know that a simple poem as lets say the cat in the hat. There was no cat or a hat before the eyes of the author. Yet we see the works of dr. Seuss everywhere. Hope that i helped ...your friend Terry Dailey aka HIPPY4FREE......
January 14th, 2017 03:14
Wind
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the mighty wind,it can be an enemy,it can be a friend,it`s always care free,
and never knows which way it blows
January 14th, 2017 00:06
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the mighty wind,it can be an enemy,it can be a friend,it`s always care free,
and never knows which way it blows
January 14th, 2017 00:06
Wind
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the mighty wind,it can be an enemy,it can be a friend,it`s always care free,
and never knows which way it blows
January 14th, 2017 00:06
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the mighty wind,it can be an enemy,it can be a friend,it`s always care free,
and never knows which way it blows
January 14th, 2017 00:06
Wind
willyweed said:
welcome nice first poem. the best way to get comments is to give comments on each and every poem here that you read. loose the S at the end of while you lives 2 line.
u don\'t want a scratch on this gem. ww
January 11th, 2017 21:38
willyweed said:
welcome nice first poem. the best way to get comments is to give comments on each and every poem here that you read. loose the S at the end of while you lives 2 line.
u don\'t want a scratch on this gem. ww
January 11th, 2017 21:38
Wind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NEHA ~ Thanks for a very beautiful and optimistic first poem. YES ! The WIND blows away the cobwebs and freshens every thing up ! We can be be like that when we let the WIND of GOD\'S HOLY SPIRIT ~ Blow through our lives each day ~ AMEN ! GOD\'S Wind blows away our doubts and fears and encourages us to be BOLD ~ be BRAVE and face each new day. SOAP cleans the outside but the Breath of our GOD cleanses us from the inside ~ AMEN ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN (UK)
January 11th, 2017 06:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NEHA ~ Thanks for a very beautiful and optimistic first poem. YES ! The WIND blows away the cobwebs and freshens every thing up ! We can be be like that when we let the WIND of GOD\'S HOLY SPIRIT ~ Blow through our lives each day ~ AMEN ! GOD\'S Wind blows away our doubts and fears and encourages us to be BOLD ~ be BRAVE and face each new day. SOAP cleans the outside but the Breath of our GOD cleanses us from the inside ~ AMEN ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN (UK)
January 11th, 2017 06:13
Wind
Liam Lawless said:
Great first poem. I liked the personification of the wind.
January 11th, 2017 02:04
Liam Lawless said:
Great first poem. I liked the personification of the wind.
January 11th, 2017 02:04
Wind
The 2 A.M Writer said:
It\'s nice, the use of words make me feel like I can actually physically feel the wind. Good write!
January 10th, 2017 22:36
The 2 A.M Writer said:
It\'s nice, the use of words make me feel like I can actually physically feel the wind. Good write!
January 10th, 2017 22:36
