Comments received on poems by Lakiea



Unknown Flower
Vincent jodi said:

That\'s a beautiful poem I would like to read more

August 25th, 2017 08:14

You vs You
lost-but-not-broken17 said:

This is beautiful

August 23rd, 2017 14:19

You vs You
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

August 23rd, 2017 11:05

You vs You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LAKIEA ~ Love the Structure of your poem ~ elegant flowing \"free verse\" Love the Subject too ~ our Alter Ego ~ our inner (sometimes hidden) SELF. As we leave the teenage years behind and progress into our 29\'s & 30\'s Men are filled with doubt and sometimes despair ~ BUT ~ we try not to show it and do our best in LIFE & LOVE ! My Alter Ego knows much better what I am capable of and sometimes when i talk to myself in a full~length Mirror my AE says go on BRIAN you can do it ~ just be Yourself ! When i do (in Life & Love) the result is always positive ! Thanks for sharing & caring this PEACOCK is spreading his Feathers ! Hugs of Appreciation ~ BRIAN

August 23rd, 2017 11:03

Reminder
myself and me said:

Straight to the point. Love it.

August 19th, 2017 20:46

Reminder
Nicholas Browning said:

That\'s true.

August 19th, 2017 08:39

Original
Simple-Man87 said:

OOOOHHHH.... I love it.

\"You can\'t fight fate.\"

My new favorite line. Great job.

August 18th, 2017 11:42

Original
Nicholas Browning said:

Interesting philosophy.

August 18th, 2017 07:59

Mystery
FredPeyer said:

A fine poem with a true message! But sometimes we might read something in these eyes that may be a reflection of what we want to see.

August 16th, 2017 10:19

Mystery
Simple-Man87 said:

Yes, you\'re absolutely right. Especially that last line. I loved it. Great job.

August 15th, 2017 10:47

Mystery
Louis Gibbs said:

So true, so very true, this poem! It echoes one of my own, which I am prompted now to publish here. Thank you for these words of wisdom, Lakiea!

August 15th, 2017 09:50

Battle
Simple-Man87 said:

Very well said. I love it.

August 14th, 2017 11:59

Battle
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I will spread my feathers.

August 14th, 2017 08:13

Unthinkable
FredPeyer said:

So true Lakiea, and a picture can be worth a thousand words! But sometimes we have to look carefully to fully understand.

August 13th, 2017 16:19

Unthinkable
Azura Nightsong said:

Short but it gets its point across. Nice!

August 13th, 2017 15:55

Why
Jooles said:

😊😊😊😊

July 28th, 2017 11:10

Is it wrong
onepauly said:

no your not wrong for that

July 27th, 2017 18:45

Is it wrong
Saima said:

No being selfish is not wrong, I\'ve recently come to terms with that, because at the end of the day...no one got you like you got yourself. Do things that make you happy. Wonderful poem btw I love it x

July 27th, 2017 15:57

Nature
FredPeyer said:

Maybe even the forest is not quiet enough to hear your quiet voice.

July 24th, 2017 19:55

Life
Tony36 said:

Great write and great advice. Welcome to MPS

January 12th, 2017 16:32

Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME FRIEND ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM. It is true we often see whar we are pre-programmed to see ! We need to b able to perceive in FOUR DIMENSIONS when often we are content just to see in TWO ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ BRIAN (UK)

January 12th, 2017 10:09