Comments received on poems by DE016
Free Write(Forever)
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I like it. Your metaphorical expression of this miserable existence is fascinating and excellently drawn. Forever by this means is indeed unattainable. I suppose that is the wonder of God's salvation, turning men away from this living death, delivering them into His kingdom and promising forever.
March 1st, 2011 22:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I like it. Your metaphorical expression of this miserable existence is fascinating and excellently drawn. Forever by this means is indeed unattainable. I suppose that is the wonder of God's salvation, turning men away from this living death, delivering them into His kingdom and promising forever.
March 1st, 2011 22:59
Free write( emotions of love)
Cheeky Missy said:
I like it. It seems to express the "love" so many taste, which burns many, grievously hurts many and embitters many. Somehow, I think it is not true love, for although that may also pain, I do not think it treats us so vilely as you mentioned scolding your heart piece by piece in the fiery pits of hell and going wrong.
March 1st, 2011 00:25
Cheeky Missy said:
I like it. It seems to express the "love" so many taste, which burns many, grievously hurts many and embitters many. Somehow, I think it is not true love, for although that may also pain, I do not think it treats us so vilely as you mentioned scolding your heart piece by piece in the fiery pits of hell and going wrong.
March 1st, 2011 00:25
