Comments received on poems by Sefrin
To Amy
Accidental Poet said:
Now if the rest of the world could have life values like this, the world would be Heaven on Earth. Excellent write Sefrin. ; )
August 29th, 2017 19:05
Accidental Poet said:
Now if the rest of the world could have life values like this, the world would be Heaven on Earth. Excellent write Sefrin. ; )
August 29th, 2017 19:05
Millia
Fay Slimm. said:
Could anyone not be comforted by reading these archaic assurances that \"love be the power behind all sweet romance.\" A delight of a read Sefrin.
August 21st, 2017 16:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Could anyone not be comforted by reading these archaic assurances that \"love be the power behind all sweet romance.\" A delight of a read Sefrin.
August 21st, 2017 16:33
Love Within A Dream
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender bounty of linguistic word-play which delights with its expert use of the archaic. - - I love the delicate use of Shakespearean language Sefrin - a favourite with me for sure .
August 18th, 2017 12:24
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender bounty of linguistic word-play which delights with its expert use of the archaic. - - I love the delicate use of Shakespearean language Sefrin - a favourite with me for sure .
August 18th, 2017 12:24
A Lover\'s Note
Accidental Poet said:
And I\'m sure she\'ll be grateful for you and this beautiful poem.
August 15th, 2017 18:34
Accidental Poet said:
And I\'m sure she\'ll be grateful for you and this beautiful poem.
August 15th, 2017 18:34
Love\'s Oath
myself and me said:
Oath might be broken, but love will last. So glad you are in love.
August 10th, 2017 20:25
myself and me said:
Oath might be broken, but love will last. So glad you are in love.
August 10th, 2017 20:25
Lonesome Without You
P.H.Rose said:
This is so beautiful .
Great write......
January 21st, 2017 19:20
P.H.Rose said:
This is so beautiful .
Great write......
January 21st, 2017 19:20
Lonesome Without You
Pintu Mahakul said:
Crimson flame does magic here. Wonderfully drafted poem is shared.
January 20th, 2017 20:33
Pintu Mahakul said:
Crimson flame does magic here. Wonderfully drafted poem is shared.
January 20th, 2017 20:33
Asleep In Your Arms
Fay Slimm. said:
Riddles with loss yet filled with beautiful love this lament shows just how deeply a love can reach. Look forward to reading more of your work.
January 17th, 2017 09:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Riddles with loss yet filled with beautiful love this lament shows just how deeply a love can reach. Look forward to reading more of your work.
January 17th, 2017 09:48
A Stolen Heart
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes - your words ask why when love is so fragile the end should come as unexpected. Romantic lines written methinks to someone the other side of life here on earth and so heartbreaking to read.
January 17th, 2017 09:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes - your words ask why when love is so fragile the end should come as unexpected. Romantic lines written methinks to someone the other side of life here on earth and so heartbreaking to read.
January 17th, 2017 09:45
Immortal Love
Fay Slimm. said:
Some wonderful lines of comfort to remember here for those who have loved and lost. A lovely read.
January 17th, 2017 09:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Some wonderful lines of comfort to remember here for those who have loved and lost. A lovely read.
January 17th, 2017 09:40
Asleep In Your Arms
Augustus said:
Nicely written in free verse. I liked the \"remorse like a stone\" line.
January 14th, 2017 10:06
Augustus said:
Nicely written in free verse. I liked the \"remorse like a stone\" line.
January 14th, 2017 10:06
Your Heart Is The Star That Shelters Me
Tony36 said:
Awesome write really enjoyed reading your words
January 13th, 2017 13:20
Tony36 said:
Awesome write really enjoyed reading your words
January 13th, 2017 13:20
Your Heart Is The Star That Shelters Me
Dford1 said:
Splendid! I thoroughly enjoyed it.
January 13th, 2017 09:37
Dford1 said:
Splendid! I thoroughly enjoyed it.
January 13th, 2017 09:37
Your Heart Is The Star That Shelters Me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LASCENASE ~ Thanks for a very elegant poem in both Structure and Subject ! Like KAT I love your choice of Elizabethan English it reads like a Shakespearean Sonnet ~ more please. I emparthise with your sentiments of LOVE ~ Thanks for sharing. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 13th, 2017 06:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LASCENASE ~ Thanks for a very elegant poem in both Structure and Subject ! Like KAT I love your choice of Elizabethan English it reads like a Shakespearean Sonnet ~ more please. I emparthise with your sentiments of LOVE ~ Thanks for sharing. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 13th, 2017 06:43
