Comments received on poems by Wilting moon
Drop of life
MendedFences27 said:
Very, very, nice. It\'s been said that all of the Universe exists in one teardrop. Your use of war-ending as a big event, where one tends to remember the small things that happen, is real and truthful. I liked the way you structured your poem, following tears that fall at different times. Well, enough from me, Thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. - Phil A.
March 26th, 2017 19:33
MendedFences27 said:
Very, very, nice. It\'s been said that all of the Universe exists in one teardrop. Your use of war-ending as a big event, where one tends to remember the small things that happen, is real and truthful. I liked the way you structured your poem, following tears that fall at different times. Well, enough from me, Thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. - Phil A.
March 26th, 2017 19:33
Alone with the night
Jarid said:
You are one of my favorite writers and this poem just did you justice! Well done!
March 13th, 2017 20:24
Jarid said:
You are one of my favorite writers and this poem just did you justice! Well done!
March 13th, 2017 20:24
Angel rose
NB said:
Wow, this is so beautiful.. I love the flow.. & the words.. & just everything ;)
January 19th, 2017 06:05
NB said:
Wow, this is so beautiful.. I love the flow.. & the words.. & just everything ;)
January 19th, 2017 06:05
Lost Love
Jarid said:
You\'ve always had it in you to produce a great poem. This is no exception. Well done, my friend!
January 18th, 2017 20:00
Jarid said:
You\'ve always had it in you to produce a great poem. This is no exception. Well done, my friend!
January 18th, 2017 20:00
Lost Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GEORGIA ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ It is elegantly penned in rhyming couplets ~ but the subject of LOST LOVE is quite tragic ~ it made me sad I trust you found it cathartic. As I get older I have faced the death of Friends and Family and it is never easy to say goodbye. If it is a very special Lover the it is inconsolable. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)`
January 18th, 2017 11:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GEORGIA ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ It is elegantly penned in rhyming couplets ~ but the subject of LOST LOVE is quite tragic ~ it made me sad I trust you found it cathartic. As I get older I have faced the death of Friends and Family and it is never easy to say goodbye. If it is a very special Lover the it is inconsolable. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)`
January 18th, 2017 11:36
