Comments received on poems by Any
The Voiceless
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and excellently expressed. I think unless the speaker is preaching the Word of God, it is possible that they never will be heard, and yet again, that they may, though highly unlikely.
March 17th, 2011 22:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and excellently expressed. I think unless the speaker is preaching the Word of God, it is possible that they never will be heard, and yet again, that they may, though highly unlikely.
March 17th, 2011 22:22
Waiting
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, too sweet! Excellent! The tension built until the reader could no longer stand it, followed too delightfully by the overwhelmingly happy conclusion. Great job!!!!
March 12th, 2011 22:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, too sweet! Excellent! The tension built until the reader could no longer stand it, followed too delightfully by the overwhelmingly happy conclusion. Great job!!!!
March 12th, 2011 22:39
Waiting
Emi said:
Awww, such a sweet poem!! I definitely know the feeling... Very well done. :)
March 11th, 2011 18:22
Emi said:
Awww, such a sweet poem!! I definitely know the feeling... Very well done. :)
March 11th, 2011 18:22
Torn Between Two
Cheeky Missy said:
You've depicted the struggle very well as aptly titled "torn between two"...very well done. Excellent,...the passions almost overpowering, the lack overwhelming, the necessity to hide it admirably, the lie realized, and wisely dumb. Very good!
March 10th, 2011 21:59
Cheeky Missy said:
You've depicted the struggle very well as aptly titled "torn between two"...very well done. Excellent,...the passions almost overpowering, the lack overwhelming, the necessity to hide it admirably, the lie realized, and wisely dumb. Very good!
March 10th, 2011 21:59
Try to move on
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, very sad. You've expressed the heartbreaking loss very well.
March 8th, 2011 00:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, very sad. You've expressed the heartbreaking loss very well.
March 8th, 2011 00:37
Distraught
Cheeky Missy said:
If only you would arrange it differently, for it verily appears you are utilizing end-rhyming, except you need to break up the lines to get the effect. It is an excellent depiction of being distraught. A very horrible condition, the way you've depicted it. Very distressing and helpless, driving one mad. How many suffer this....calmly saying when asked, "Oh, I'm fine."?
March 5th, 2011 21:23
Cheeky Missy said:
If only you would arrange it differently, for it verily appears you are utilizing end-rhyming, except you need to break up the lines to get the effect. It is an excellent depiction of being distraught. A very horrible condition, the way you've depicted it. Very distressing and helpless, driving one mad. How many suffer this....calmly saying when asked, "Oh, I'm fine."?
March 5th, 2011 21:23
