Comments received on poems by jenny1959
Pension Day at the Post Office
Elizabethan Sea said:
Very fun to read. I like the rhythm and rhyme scheme. It\'s kind of funny, familiar, and has that nice message about honesty. I like it. Definitely agree with Tommy. :)
February 3rd, 2017 21:39
Elizabethan Sea said:
Very fun to read. I like the rhythm and rhyme scheme. It\'s kind of funny, familiar, and has that nice message about honesty. I like it. Definitely agree with Tommy. :)
February 3rd, 2017 21:39
Pension Day at the Post Office
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff - such an enjoyable read of past times - or are they?
February 3rd, 2017 16:22
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff - such an enjoyable read of past times - or are they?
February 3rd, 2017 16:22
Pension Day at the Post Office
Fay Slimm. said:
A well written story of two different viewpoints but I vote for Tommy for sure. Grand read.
February 3rd, 2017 14:01
Fay Slimm. said:
A well written story of two different viewpoints but I vote for Tommy for sure. Grand read.
February 3rd, 2017 14:01
The Empty Wardrobe
Philip said:
Just describing the cloths simply and saying what each one meant allowed me appreciate how you were imagining this loved one.
February 2nd, 2017 13:57
Philip said:
Just describing the cloths simply and saying what each one meant allowed me appreciate how you were imagining this loved one.
February 2nd, 2017 13:57
Why can\'t I sleep?
Philip said:
I know the feeling. try coffee in the morning only. Great poem
January 30th, 2017 15:30
Philip said:
I know the feeling. try coffee in the morning only. Great poem
January 30th, 2017 15:30
Depression Isn\'t catching
mammyo3 said:
I deal with a lot of people who suffer depression, and mostly someone even saying good morning can make a difference, thanks :)
January 29th, 2017 13:57
mammyo3 said:
I deal with a lot of people who suffer depression, and mostly someone even saying good morning can make a difference, thanks :)
January 29th, 2017 13:57
Who cares for the carer
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and you are absolutely right
January 27th, 2017 23:26
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and you are absolutely right
January 27th, 2017 23:26
Who cares for the carer
Augustus said:
Maybe this isn\'t exactly about what your poem is about but seriously there serious problems with the caretakers of very ill people. Like Altsheimers disease. It is very demanding. Nicely done.
January 27th, 2017 18:22
Augustus said:
Maybe this isn\'t exactly about what your poem is about but seriously there serious problems with the caretakers of very ill people. Like Altsheimers disease. It is very demanding. Nicely done.
January 27th, 2017 18:22
Victim
Christina8 said:
Very good poem, great rhyme and rhythm. Your story is so sad! But I hope you found a release in telling your story. You are such a strong person! Thanks for sharing!
January 26th, 2017 15:02
Christina8 said:
Very good poem, great rhyme and rhythm. Your story is so sad! But I hope you found a release in telling your story. You are such a strong person! Thanks for sharing!
January 26th, 2017 15:02
Victim
rrodriguez said:
Wow Jenny, I have to say that your poem has power and a redeeming strength. Awesome poem!
January 26th, 2017 11:02
rrodriguez said:
Wow Jenny, I have to say that your poem has power and a redeeming strength. Awesome poem!
January 26th, 2017 11:02
Victim
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT POEM JENNY ~ Very honest and very graphic. It is always cathartic to unload our negative childhood experiences in a poem. Thanks for sharing and caring. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
January 26th, 2017 10:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT POEM JENNY ~ Very honest and very graphic. It is always cathartic to unload our negative childhood experiences in a poem. Thanks for sharing and caring. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
January 26th, 2017 10:59
Missing
Augustus said:
This reads so effortlessly for the seriousness of the subject.
January 24th, 2017 22:58
Augustus said:
This reads so effortlessly for the seriousness of the subject.
January 24th, 2017 22:58
Missing
My_Brain said:
Wow this is such an emotional poem. Great write! I hope they find there way home. ~Bella
January 24th, 2017 18:40
My_Brain said:
Wow this is such an emotional poem. Great write! I hope they find there way home. ~Bella
January 24th, 2017 18:40
The good old days
Edthepoet said:
I\'d like to go back to a decade ago before the big shift into social media and smart phones, technology that was made to set us free has imprisoned the basic art of conversation, people attend gigs and watch the whole thing through their smart phone, put it away! You\'re actually there! Excellent poem, really enjoyed the flow.
January 23rd, 2017 12:52
Edthepoet said:
I\'d like to go back to a decade ago before the big shift into social media and smart phones, technology that was made to set us free has imprisoned the basic art of conversation, people attend gigs and watch the whole thing through their smart phone, put it away! You\'re actually there! Excellent poem, really enjoyed the flow.
January 23rd, 2017 12:52
What will they do with Grandma?
Tony36 said:
Dealing with my own aging grandma an parent\'s I can understand. Great write
January 22nd, 2017 11:26
Tony36 said:
Dealing with my own aging grandma an parent\'s I can understand. Great write
January 22nd, 2017 11:26
What will they do with Grandma?
poppyblue1960 said:
Love it.
I did care for my mum until the day she passed away in my arms and I had 5 children a job and still managed to look after her some people just don\'t care theses days ❤
January 22nd, 2017 10:34
poppyblue1960 said:
Love it.
I did care for my mum until the day she passed away in my arms and I had 5 children a job and still managed to look after her some people just don\'t care theses days ❤
January 22nd, 2017 10:34
My Grandmother\'s Hands
Projectbeing said:
I feel inspired to.write about my grandma,old jamaican woman,lovely soul. Lovely poem,thanks
January 20th, 2017 17:54
Projectbeing said:
I feel inspired to.write about my grandma,old jamaican woman,lovely soul. Lovely poem,thanks
January 20th, 2017 17:54
My Grandmother\'s Hands
WriteBeLight said:
Great job expressing your feelings and observations of a dear person in your life.
January 20th, 2017 16:39
WriteBeLight said:
Great job expressing your feelings and observations of a dear person in your life.
January 20th, 2017 16:39
My Grandmother\'s Hands
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written tribute to your Grandmother
January 20th, 2017 09:15
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written tribute to your Grandmother
January 20th, 2017 09:15
My Grandmother\'s Hands
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JENNY ~ Perfect poem ~ lovely subject. It is true Jenny ~ as you illustrate in this gem ~ A person\'s hand reflect their life ~ especially GRANNIES ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
January 20th, 2017 08:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JENNY ~ Perfect poem ~ lovely subject. It is true Jenny ~ as you illustrate in this gem ~ A person\'s hand reflect their life ~ especially GRANNIES ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
January 20th, 2017 08:29
My Mother
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and i bet she is still watching over you now..
January 19th, 2017 23:21
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and i bet she is still watching over you now..
January 19th, 2017 23:21
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