Comments received on poems by m4y4_bee
Sestina
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Clever stuff. Sounds like a time consuming process, to get it just right and still have it flow. Congrats on the accomplishment. Very interesting theme. Well polished presentation. Easy to read. Many intriguing phrases, \" I felt like a plastic frozen cow, waiting to be freed from a cavernous heart.\" Great work. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 17:07
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Clever stuff. Sounds like a time consuming process, to get it just right and still have it flow. Congrats on the accomplishment. Very interesting theme. Well polished presentation. Easy to read. Many intriguing phrases, \" I felt like a plastic frozen cow, waiting to be freed from a cavernous heart.\" Great work. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 17:07
Sestina
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW M4Y4BEE ~ By posting a SESTINA (an example of Lexical repetition) with a perfect final TERCET you have really raised the bar of \"Classical Poetic Forms\" on MPS by seven feet ! The Structure is perfect and the Subject intriguing. Cows frozen in ice ? Where do you live Michigan ? The only adv~ ice I can give is beware of over friendly milkman. I have red hair and so did our Milkman and I live on MILK ! Yours Brian
February 17th, 2017 04:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW M4Y4BEE ~ By posting a SESTINA (an example of Lexical repetition) with a perfect final TERCET you have really raised the bar of \"Classical Poetic Forms\" on MPS by seven feet ! The Structure is perfect and the Subject intriguing. Cows frozen in ice ? Where do you live Michigan ? The only adv~ ice I can give is beware of over friendly milkman. I have red hair and so did our Milkman and I live on MILK ! Yours Brian
February 17th, 2017 04:35
Man in the Moon
Michael Edwards said:
Yes this really appeals to me - I can see the picture in my mind\'s eye.
January 23rd, 2017 03:09
Michael Edwards said:
Yes this really appeals to me - I can see the picture in my mind\'s eye.
January 23rd, 2017 03:09
Before the Hush [heartbreak no. 1 in e minor]
WriteBeLight said:
There are several references to spores. But, I don\'t mind. Enjoyed reading it. The first lines I found to be quite visual, in a gross way, but that is the point :)
January 22nd, 2017 07:59
WriteBeLight said:
There are several references to spores. But, I don\'t mind. Enjoyed reading it. The first lines I found to be quite visual, in a gross way, but that is the point :)
January 22nd, 2017 07:59
