Believe
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A nice motivating poem very inspiring. Good rhyming too. Thumbs up.

Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to. Even one line will do.


January 29th, 2017 08:25

My generation
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for a great Poem my FRIEND ~ It has tremendous Rhyme & Rhythm ~ beautiful. I like the concept that each Generation has a different focus and you need to flock (stick) together to make a difference in the World ! However TEENS should always respect SENIORS and vice versa ! Both should respect the WORKERS (in-betweeners !). Thanks for carin ~ BRIAN

January 25th, 2017 07:12

Rhymes I live by
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sad,sad write,you have the power to change it all,change your mind,change your life

January 23rd, 2017 22:50

Rhymes I live by
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for a very interesting poem ! It pulsates with rhyme and rhythm and the subject pulsates with PAIN ~ Please you find it cathartic to write poetry, I have lost loved ones so I can empathise ! Love the city skyline in the Sun ~ to me it represents the challenge we face each day as we venture out into the real World ! Love your final line \"If I died today ................... blindfold\" i about sums up how p[eople feel when we have gone. Thanks for sharing & caring ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN ~ UK Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B

January 23rd, 2017 19:14