Comments received on poems by yellowbee
Blind Eyes
laurennmckenna said:
I\'m going to write an poem about being enticed by older men
January 25th, 2017 13:49
laurennmckenna said:
I\'m going to write an poem about being enticed by older men
January 25th, 2017 13:49
Blind Eyes
janetaylor said:
fascinating write. i love the form and manner in which you write. it immediately draws one in. i was transfixed. i do respectfully disagree with the conclusions drawn. i once wrote a poem called \"blank canvas\" and it actually thanks god, the universe, or whatever your belief system is, for allowing me the opportunity to paint. i never accept another\'s painting of me. that\'s their projection. and fear and selfishness are definitely the opposite of what i believe life is all about ~ LOVE. this is a thought provoking well written piece and i look forward to more of your work. i adore the sort of stream of consciousness style in which you write. a job well done!
January 25th, 2017 11:54
janetaylor said:
fascinating write. i love the form and manner in which you write. it immediately draws one in. i was transfixed. i do respectfully disagree with the conclusions drawn. i once wrote a poem called \"blank canvas\" and it actually thanks god, the universe, or whatever your belief system is, for allowing me the opportunity to paint. i never accept another\'s painting of me. that\'s their projection. and fear and selfishness are definitely the opposite of what i believe life is all about ~ LOVE. this is a thought provoking well written piece and i look forward to more of your work. i adore the sort of stream of consciousness style in which you write. a job well done!
January 25th, 2017 11:54
If I Could See.
janetaylor said:
absolutely superb! sublime! the depth of your description strikes the soul with a mighty force. a job well done!
January 25th, 2017 11:10
janetaylor said:
absolutely superb! sublime! the depth of your description strikes the soul with a mighty force. a job well done!
January 25th, 2017 11:10
If I Could See.
S.L Appleby said:
I really liked this especially the last part \" We have all been alone, there is no such thing as a universal crowd, we are too unique, I listen again, everyone sounds a little different when you look closely enough\"
January 24th, 2017 20:00
S.L Appleby said:
I really liked this especially the last part \" We have all been alone, there is no such thing as a universal crowd, we are too unique, I listen again, everyone sounds a little different when you look closely enough\"
January 24th, 2017 20:00
If I Could See.
Hopey_xx said:
Great poem, love it!
I\'m not particularly a fan of crowds either, I feel alone in them more than surrounded by people! xD
January 24th, 2017 15:31
Hopey_xx said:
Great poem, love it!
I\'m not particularly a fan of crowds either, I feel alone in them more than surrounded by people! xD
January 24th, 2017 15:31
If I Could See.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BEE ~ Thanks for your first POEM. I like free verse because it does not restrict linguistic eloquence ! I like the structure ~ you have chosen ~ lined to the left as I look at it. It looks like a random crowd of people which is subject of your poem ~ OK. I am not ENOCHIPHOBIC (afraid of crowds !) provided there is still plenty of clear space ~ I don\'t like being crushed and I feel claustrophobic in lifts ! I have friends who don\'t like CROWDS and it can make life difficult ! Thanks for sharing ~ Thinking of you ~ Thanks BRIAN.
January 24th, 2017 12:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BEE ~ Thanks for your first POEM. I like free verse because it does not restrict linguistic eloquence ! I like the structure ~ you have chosen ~ lined to the left as I look at it. It looks like a random crowd of people which is subject of your poem ~ OK. I am not ENOCHIPHOBIC (afraid of crowds !) provided there is still plenty of clear space ~ I don\'t like being crushed and I feel claustrophobic in lifts ! I have friends who don\'t like CROWDS and it can make life difficult ! Thanks for sharing ~ Thinking of you ~ Thanks BRIAN.
January 24th, 2017 12:12
