Comments received on poems by skylar

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ianhm said:

excellent love it love it great poem that made me want more

August 3rd, 2012 08:30

I Wake and Have No Father
Cheeky Missy said:

An excellent gentle exposition in tasteful story form of the modern "Christian gospel" Tinged poignant, it seems a good way of witnessing that "gospel" to any reading public. Good imagery too. But I beg to differ with the "gospel' taught herein.

January 8th, 2012 20:24

Standing Before The Grave
Cheeky Missy said:

Very interesting and thought-provoking. Good imagery portraying the case of the departed as so foul....and helpless. The turning and conclusion are excellent. Good end-rhyming.

August 2nd, 2011 20:10

Partey Time!
skylar said:

neva thought of it that way lol thx you like it? lol

July 23rd, 2011 22:32

Partey Time!
Cheeky Missy said:

Very interesting and fascinating! It poignantly evoked the excitement effectively. Indeed a curious solution to being home alone...create a party. Only, as you so excellently concluded, it ends eventually, leaving the lonely again in solitude. Excellent imagery too.

July 22nd, 2011 21:23