Comments received on poems by Andrew5yungk
Grey
L. B. Mek said:
you have a wonderful gift for free flowing rhythm,
thanks for sharing, a great read
October 26th, 2021 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
you have a wonderful gift for free flowing rhythm,
thanks for sharing, a great read
October 26th, 2021 05:52
Grey
jarcher54 said:
The courage you exemplify here is palpable, your suffering is heavy and real, and your expression of it is fierce and exhausting and yet beautiful and hopeful. I think we are all potential poets for different reasons, but you are a poet because your spirit cannot stop fighting. Thank you for being so determined to express yourself. It is a bit of an honor to be allowed to get so close to you.
October 26th, 2021 02:06
jarcher54 said:
The courage you exemplify here is palpable, your suffering is heavy and real, and your expression of it is fierce and exhausting and yet beautiful and hopeful. I think we are all potential poets for different reasons, but you are a poet because your spirit cannot stop fighting. Thank you for being so determined to express yourself. It is a bit of an honor to be allowed to get so close to you.
October 26th, 2021 02:06
The Demon Inside
Goldfinch60 said:
Many have demons inside them but they are well hidden to others. Good write.
May 13th, 2017 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Many have demons inside them but they are well hidden to others. Good write.
May 13th, 2017 00:32
A Pardox of Magic
Christina8 said:
Great poem! You express yourself well. Sorry you feel like you are a hollow shell. I have been there. Your poem is wonderful. It helps to express yourself and maybe then you will find your way. Great job!
January 31st, 2017 11:28
Christina8 said:
Great poem! You express yourself well. Sorry you feel like you are a hollow shell. I have been there. Your poem is wonderful. It helps to express yourself and maybe then you will find your way. Great job!
January 31st, 2017 11:28
A Life in a Colorful Hell
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS. Good job on your first poem. I hope you found it cathartic to write! I see you have found yourself in a depression, which I can relate, but I\'m happy to see that you have found a light. Although it\'s dim, there is hope. I hope your light gets brighter. And I hope you write again tomorrow! --Christina
January 30th, 2017 16:56
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS. Good job on your first poem. I hope you found it cathartic to write! I see you have found yourself in a depression, which I can relate, but I\'m happy to see that you have found a light. Although it\'s dim, there is hope. I hope your light gets brighter. And I hope you write again tomorrow! --Christina
January 30th, 2017 16:56
A Life in a Colorful Hell
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
January 30th, 2017 15:49
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
January 30th, 2017 15:49
