Comments received on poems by vvnrose
Vanity
L. B. Mek said:
\'Desires so hard to appease
Sometimes to the point that I lose sight of acceptance
This being unauthentically me
I dont like cracks from a muddy and scarred past
Peaks and valleys displaying the ways I fail\'..
(raw - fears, laments, hopes and wishes
inked, bravely transparent and sincere
and so, so well written!
what a poetic talent you\'ve been gifted, dear poet
thank you! for choosing to share)
stay Strong!
August 1st, 2022 02:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'Desires so hard to appease
Sometimes to the point that I lose sight of acceptance
This being unauthentically me
I dont like cracks from a muddy and scarred past
Peaks and valleys displaying the ways I fail\'..
(raw - fears, laments, hopes and wishes
inked, bravely transparent and sincere
and so, so well written!
what a poetic talent you\'ve been gifted, dear poet
thank you! for choosing to share)
stay Strong!
August 1st, 2022 02:37
As Above, So Below
vvnrose said:
The universe moves quickly once we decide! What we put out into the world is like a boomerang!
November 19th, 2019 07:15
vvnrose said:
The universe moves quickly once we decide! What we put out into the world is like a boomerang!
November 19th, 2019 07:15
Where is Love
Poetic Dan said:
Here on your page for me to read, so grateful be in fine company!
November 8th, 2019 08:27
Poetic Dan said:
Here on your page for me to read, so grateful be in fine company!
November 8th, 2019 08:27
The Greatest Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write, your child (children?) will be forever blessed with your love showing them the way.
September 24th, 2019 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write, your child (children?) will be forever blessed with your love showing them the way.
September 24th, 2019 00:50
My Shadow Work ;)
vvnrose said:
Wow, thanks so much for your comments guys (and gals). I find them very encouraging while on this path.
September 8th, 2019 11:21
vvnrose said:
Wow, thanks so much for your comments guys (and gals). I find them very encouraging while on this path.
September 8th, 2019 11:21
My Shadow Work ;)
dusk arising said:
I am with Goldfinch on this. If you have begun to look within then keep on, there is much to find and learn. There is a light within us all which, if sought, will guide you.
It would be nice to read more from you on similar.
September 8th, 2019 09:48
dusk arising said:
I am with Goldfinch on this. If you have begun to look within then keep on, there is much to find and learn. There is a light within us all which, if sought, will guide you.
It would be nice to read more from you on similar.
September 8th, 2019 09:48
My Shadow Work ;)
Goldfinch60 said:
To see what is there we must look deeply within ourselves to see the real person.
Good write.
September 8th, 2019 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
To see what is there we must look deeply within ourselves to see the real person.
Good write.
September 8th, 2019 00:50
The Walking Dead
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know you knew \'EastEnders\' so well - in this poem! lol. Putrid, hideous, walking dead, etc. heehee.
Or some equally ghastly soap serial in your country, if you don\'t live in the U.K.
August 31st, 2019 11:23
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know you knew \'EastEnders\' so well - in this poem! lol. Putrid, hideous, walking dead, etc. heehee.
Or some equally ghastly soap serial in your country, if you don\'t live in the U.K.
August 31st, 2019 11:23
The Dark Knight
FineB said:
Hello Vnrose,
A great write.
I think of Batman when I read this.
Keep writing FineB
June 22nd, 2019 16:21
FineB said:
Hello Vnrose,
A great write.
I think of Batman when I read this.
Keep writing FineB
June 22nd, 2019 16:21
Words in a Script
FineB said:
Hello VVNrose.
A super write.
Words are a power in themselves.
Keep writing FineB.
May 22nd, 2019 16:49
FineB said:
Hello VVNrose.
A super write.
Words are a power in themselves.
Keep writing FineB.
May 22nd, 2019 16:49
The Journey
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and true write vv, life is there ahead of us to be enjoyed, each new moment is so special.
February 8th, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and true write vv, life is there ahead of us to be enjoyed, each new moment is so special.
February 8th, 2019 01:25
The Journey
dusk arising said:
Lots of wisdom expressed in just a few lines from you.
Good, very enjoyable reading.
February 7th, 2019 16:18
dusk arising said:
Lots of wisdom expressed in just a few lines from you.
Good, very enjoyable reading.
February 7th, 2019 16:18
Farewell
psychofemale said:
such an awesome piece you have here, just good writing.
January 20th, 2019 17:11
psychofemale said:
such an awesome piece you have here, just good writing.
January 20th, 2019 17:11
Because I can\'t tell you how I feel
mylittleheart said:
happy to read a poem i can relate to so much right now
June 3rd, 2017 16:12
mylittleheart said:
happy to read a poem i can relate to so much right now
June 3rd, 2017 16:12
Daydream
Bibbeck said:
Lovely write!
I hope that you have a \'go to\' that has fulfilled at least a part of that daydream.
May 2nd, 2017 16:29
Bibbeck said:
Lovely write!
I hope that you have a \'go to\' that has fulfilled at least a part of that daydream.
May 2nd, 2017 16:29
Vulnerable?
WriteBeLight said:
I can relate to this very much. Great poetry and message and I feel your frustration. :)
April 29th, 2017 07:12
WriteBeLight said:
I can relate to this very much. Great poetry and message and I feel your frustration. :)
April 29th, 2017 07:12
Desperate
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Sad lyrical and expressed swell in moving poetic lyrics. It has a great meter n rhyme in many places. Thumbs up.
Pls do read my poems too but coment only on the latest. U r most welcome to..
April 27th, 2017 23:05
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Sad lyrical and expressed swell in moving poetic lyrics. It has a great meter n rhyme in many places. Thumbs up.
Pls do read my poems too but coment only on the latest. U r most welcome to..
April 27th, 2017 23:05
Awakening
willyweed said:
the universe beautiful and mysterious . nice work rose!
April 20th, 2017 08:11
willyweed said:
the universe beautiful and mysterious . nice work rose!
April 20th, 2017 08:11
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