Comments received on poems by Ash
Reality
Caring dove said:
hello ash , this is one intense read! reality is definately too much at times and we don\'t know how to handle it . this is a very good piece of writing.
April 9th, 2018 16:21
Caring dove said:
hello ash , this is one intense read! reality is definately too much at times and we don\'t know how to handle it . this is a very good piece of writing.
April 9th, 2018 16:21
The wine speaks...
Goldfinch60 said:
In that darkness you may still glimpse the light and when you glimpse it go towards it and all will be well.
Good emotive write
April 2nd, 2018 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
In that darkness you may still glimpse the light and when you glimpse it go towards it and all will be well.
Good emotive write
April 2nd, 2018 00:34
Which Path Will You Take?
Laura🌻 said:
Yes, indeed, Ash!
An excellent writing!
Our many travelled paths
do make our lives
worthwhile living!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 04:08
Laura🌻 said:
Yes, indeed, Ash!
An excellent writing!
Our many travelled paths
do make our lives
worthwhile living!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 04:08
Which Path Will You Take?
Goldfinch60 said:
We each tread different paths and those paths change as age becomes us. Looking back those paths can be see but you can also see \"the path less travelled\" and think of those words \"What if.....\"
March 12th, 2018 03:15
Goldfinch60 said:
We each tread different paths and those paths change as age becomes us. Looking back those paths can be see but you can also see \"the path less travelled\" and think of those words \"What if.....\"
March 12th, 2018 03:15
Wish I Knew
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write. The answer is out there and may come to you in a most unexpected way.
March 14th, 2017 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write. The answer is out there and may come to you in a most unexpected way.
March 14th, 2017 02:09
Wish I Knew
JJCooke said:
This is very good I enjoyed reading it. And the answers are all within you.
March 13th, 2017 22:45
JJCooke said:
This is very good I enjoyed reading it. And the answers are all within you.
March 13th, 2017 22:45
Help me understand
Goldfinch60 said:
Many relationships can be boisterous to say the least. It is up to you to determine if you want a safe and maybe boring life or one filled with the excitement of the unknown. Good write.
March 5th, 2017 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Many relationships can be boisterous to say the least. It is up to you to determine if you want a safe and maybe boring life or one filled with the excitement of the unknown. Good write.
March 5th, 2017 02:31
Help me understand
WG7 said:
Do whatever your heart wants. Let your brain AND heart chose. Let your institution help. We won\'t pick for you. Who do you want to be with forever. Who do you think will be a great father and not just a hook up. Chose for yourself. We can\'t chose your path for YOUR life. Who do you love? Who will be a great husband? Who will be a amazing father? Fighting is good. It means you have a healthy relationship. Though chose what you want. Though most importantly who do you love? Who do you want to be with? Who do you think will be a good influence? Do you think your children (if you would have any) would look up to him? Though if you do break up with the one you\'re with right now. Dont go with the guy right away. That\'s not right. Though I think you want to be with the drug because you love him. You guys know each other and how to communicate. If one of them hurts you physically don\'t be with them. No women needs that. Though I\'m not good with relationships or anything because I\'m only 14 so I don\'t got enough...insight. I hope you pick the guy you want. This poem is beautiful. I love it. Though one more thing. Whomever keeps on telling you that you should by with the guy that you have a \"perfect\" relationship with needs to stop because it\'s your life not there\'s. Sorry that I wrote a lot.
March 4th, 2017 21:55
WG7 said:
Do whatever your heart wants. Let your brain AND heart chose. Let your institution help. We won\'t pick for you. Who do you want to be with forever. Who do you think will be a great father and not just a hook up. Chose for yourself. We can\'t chose your path for YOUR life. Who do you love? Who will be a great husband? Who will be a amazing father? Fighting is good. It means you have a healthy relationship. Though chose what you want. Though most importantly who do you love? Who do you want to be with? Who do you think will be a good influence? Do you think your children (if you would have any) would look up to him? Though if you do break up with the one you\'re with right now. Dont go with the guy right away. That\'s not right. Though I think you want to be with the drug because you love him. You guys know each other and how to communicate. If one of them hurts you physically don\'t be with them. No women needs that. Though I\'m not good with relationships or anything because I\'m only 14 so I don\'t got enough...insight. I hope you pick the guy you want. This poem is beautiful. I love it. Though one more thing. Whomever keeps on telling you that you should by with the guy that you have a \"perfect\" relationship with needs to stop because it\'s your life not there\'s. Sorry that I wrote a lot.
March 4th, 2017 21:55
Help me understand
mariebonilla099 said:
this is a really nice poem. hope you continue to write.
March 4th, 2017 18:11
mariebonilla099 said:
this is a really nice poem. hope you continue to write.
March 4th, 2017 18:11
Life through my eyes
P.H.Rose said:
Now this is my kind of poem
A story in every word.
Love it... you write as
I do, trying to tell a
Story in poetic words.
If you get a moment
Read some of my other
Poems, they are very
Much in the vane
Of yours
February 17th, 2017 06:09
P.H.Rose said:
Now this is my kind of poem
A story in every word.
Love it... you write as
I do, trying to tell a
Story in poetic words.
If you get a moment
Read some of my other
Poems, they are very
Much in the vane
Of yours
February 17th, 2017 06:09
Confusion
P.H.Rose said:
I love this poem Ash,
It is so well written
Flows beautifully
Well done...
February 17th, 2017 06:05
P.H.Rose said:
I love this poem Ash,
It is so well written
Flows beautifully
Well done...
February 17th, 2017 06:05
Life through my eyes
MendedFences27 said:
Great story-telling in poetic form. Sounds as though it would be a tough place to run a restaurant. Your heroine needs further adventures/observations. There must be a pack of stories from inside that restaurant. Liked your style, raw, honest, straight to the point. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2017 16:26
MendedFences27 said:
Great story-telling in poetic form. Sounds as though it would be a tough place to run a restaurant. Your heroine needs further adventures/observations. There must be a pack of stories from inside that restaurant. Liked your style, raw, honest, straight to the point. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2017 16:26
Life through my eyes
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ASH ~ Thanks for your first mega poem. Love all the images you paint in this poem ~ the Agony & Ecstasy of All Human Life. We can all relate at some level ! I love the ending because \"Restaurants\" are a key feature of any Mall in any Town in any Country. A place not only of sustenance but also of discourse ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
February 15th, 2017 15:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ASH ~ Thanks for your first mega poem. Love all the images you paint in this poem ~ the Agony & Ecstasy of All Human Life. We can all relate at some level ! I love the ending because \"Restaurants\" are a key feature of any Mall in any Town in any Country. A place not only of sustenance but also of discourse ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
February 15th, 2017 15:05
